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Post by djlamar2 on Oct 26, 2010 20:12:11 GMT -8
So at the request of Marbletoast here it is ladies and gentlemen. What could have happened to the Rainbow of Light. Many questions go through our minds on My little pony friendship is magic Episode 2 (Aka Friendship is Magic part 2) So here it is. Bear with me. Its gonna be a work in progress. This will see the end of the villains (And maybe answer "What happened to Hydia, Reeka and Draggle before Nightmare Moon came into being) And hey I'm adding a special baby pony into the episode (Can you guess who that might be?) And a Pegacorn (Yes a Pegacorn is seen). Who is it? What is her name? How the Rainbow of Light broken into 5 pieces? Find out in The Rainbow of Light's last stand (Or is it) We start 20 years later. Megan gets a visit by her friends:
Megan: What a beautiful morning. Wouldn't you agree Crystal? *Yes she has a daughter in this story.*
Crystal: I agree. *Just then Windwhistler comes flying in*
Megan: Windwhistler!
Windwhistler: Megan something has happened in Ponyland. A Pegacorn has come to Ponyland from Aqrestria. *Sorry don't know how to spell it*
Megan: A Pegacorn?
Windwhistler: Yes. A unicorn and a pegasi. She looks pregnant. You must come quickly.
Megan: Crystal you stay here. Can Molly and Danny come?
Windwhistler: Yes and your parents. *Megan gets a sad look on her face* What's wrong Megan?
Megan: They passed away 2 years ago.
Windwhistler: Sorry to hear that Megan.
Crystal: Please let me come?
Megan: *Sighs* If you promise that if there is any trouble you hightail it out of there. You got it?
Crystal: Yes mom.
Windwhistler: O.K. *Megan, Crystal and Windwhistler go to see Molly 1st*
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Post by Bright Glow on Oct 27, 2010 2:08:54 GMT -8
Yay! This seems to be very exciting. Can't wait to read more.
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Post by sunstar on Oct 27, 2010 10:36:10 GMT -8
You've got great dialogue going. You should describe things too. Right now, for all we know, they could be on the moon. Also, please write out your words like Someone or Everyone. It makes it easier for the reader to understand.
You do have a good start. Can't wait for more!
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Post by djlamar2 on Oct 27, 2010 19:45:05 GMT -8
They head to Molly's house and ring the doorbell. A little boy comes out:
Megan: Hey Jim. Is your mama home?
Jim: She sure is. Hold on. Mom aunt Megan is here.
Molly: Be right there in a second. *Comes to the door* Windwhistler.
Windwhistler: Hi Molly. Guess this little boy is your son?
Molly: Yep. What's up? *She tells her what's happening* So what's the Pegacorn's name?
Windwhistler: We don't know. She passed out in front of Paradise Estate.
Molly: Jim I'm heading to Ponyland. Tell your daddy.... *A man comes to the door* Oh hey Kent.
Kent: Hi. I'm Molly's husband. You must be Shady.
Molly: No honey. Shady is an earth pony. This is Windwhistler. She's a Pegasi.
Kent: My apologies. Trouble?
Megan: No. But we may need Molly to help.
Kent: Let me come with you. Sounds like you need an extra hand or two.
Megan: Good idea.
Molly: Guess we can't leave Jim alone either. Let's go to Danny's. *They head off to Danny's house*
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Post by sunstar on Oct 28, 2010 12:13:01 GMT -8
Dialogue's great so far! I'd like to see some descriptions, too. Good work!
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Post by djlamar2 on Oct 29, 2010 9:31:32 GMT -8
They head to Danny's:
Megan: I'll ring the doorbell. *Rings the doorbell and a 2 little girls come out* Hi. Tamara and Jesse.
Jesse: Hi aunt Megan.
Megan: Is your daddy home?
Tamara: He sure is. Is that 1 of the little ponies?
Megan: Yep. This is Windwhistler.
Windwhistler: I surmise these two are twins.
Jesse and Tamara: Huh?
Megan: Yes they are twins. *Danny comes out*
Danny: Hey Megan. *He's holding another little girl* Say hi Catrina.
Catrina: H... Hi.
Danny: Named her after our friend.
Megan: Yep.
Windwhistler: Cool. *She gets a message from Wishing Star*
Wishing Star: Her contractions are getting closer Windwhistler.
Windwhistler: Got it. Megan the Pegacorn is gonna have her baby soon. We'd better hurry.
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Post by djlamar2 on Oct 30, 2010 9:29:53 GMT -8
Windwhistler tells Wishing Star to send some Pegasis for Megan, Danny and Molly and their family. They all head to Ponyland via the pegasies:
Windwhistler: Here we are. *Megan rushes into Paradise Estate and runs to the Pegacorn's side*
Megan: Hi. I'm Megan.
Pegacorn: I'm Daydancer.
Megan: Wow a real Pegacorn. Daydancer stay with us O.K?
Daydancer: I'll try. *Her contractions get stronger and Megan notices a little pony head*
Megan: Its the baby. Its coming out. *Gets her hands out to catch her and its a pegacorn with rainbow colored hair* That's odd. Never saw a baby pony with rainbow hair before. Uh. *Sees another head* Its another baby. She's gonna have twins. *Hears the Pegacorn screaming in pain* Oh no. She's having problems delivering the baby. *Reaches in and motions the other ponies to keep her daughter away*
Windwhistler: Nothing to see Crystal. *Daydancer screams 1 more time and Megan holds up a completely black pegacorn*
Megan: A black pegacorn? That's also odd. *Daydancer is out of breath* You gonna be O.K?
Daydancer: Let me name my babies please. *She holds up the 1st 1* Celestia. That's gonna be her name. *She holds up the black pegacorn* Luna. *She lays her head down and closes her eyes and stops breathing*
Megan: No! Please no! She can't die. *Starts C.P.R she learned in college* Come on dammit. Live. *Breaths into her mouth* Please. *Megan continues to do C.P.R till Windwhistler stops her* No Windwhistler please. I have to save her.
Windwhistler: She's gone Megan. Its O.K. *Megan leans over and cries on Windwhistler's shoulder*
(This is 1 of the reasons why its PG13. So you know.)
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Post by Bright Glow on Oct 30, 2010 11:32:16 GMT -8
Oh, poor Daydancer.  I can't wait to see what will happening with Baby Celestia and Baby Luna. I guess you'll jump long time soon. |
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Post by sunstar on Oct 30, 2010 18:05:03 GMT -8
Poor Daydancer. I would still like to see discriptions, but this is good so far.
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Post by djlamar2 on Oct 31, 2010 9:03:53 GMT -8
With the death of Daydancer Megan has been silent. Crystal keeps asking if she's O.K. but no answer. They are at home:
Crystal: Mama. Please talk to me.
The image keeps going through her head:
Megan: You gonna be O.K? *Remembers the time Daydancer died*
Back in the present Windwhistler comes to see her and rings the doorbell and Crystal answers:
Windwhistler: Is she still not talking? *Crystal nods* Lemme talk to her. *She does* Megan. *Sees her holding a picture of her friends* Megan please say something. You can't hold yourself accountable for what happened. We haven't seen you in days.
Megan: Do you think she hates me Windwhistler?
Windwhistler: That's the way. *Looks her in the eyes* Megan what happened that day wasn't your fault. Sure she died in your arms.
Megan: But I could have saved her.
Windwhistler: Look at this Megan. *Holds out a piece of paper showing the details of Daydancer's death* Read the last paragraph.
Megan: But......
Crystal: Please mama.
Megan: *Reading the paper* Cause of death......... Internal bleeding. So she bled to death?
Windwhistler: My guess would be is her water broke and it wouldn't stop. So see it wasn't your fault she died. *Sees a smile come to Megan's face*
Crystal: She smiled.
Megan: I forgot how wonderful it felt to smile. What about the babies? Are they O.K?
Windwhistler: They sure are. Come on I'll show ya. They are very smart Megan. 2 days ago they started talking.
Megan: Cute.
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Post by Bright Glow on Oct 31, 2010 9:36:25 GMT -8
Well Daydancer's death sure shocked Megan. By the way I still don't know how she looked like.
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Post by sunstar on Oct 31, 2010 16:12:22 GMT -8
Must have character discriptions!!!! We can't read your mind, so please, describe, describe, discribe!
Can't wait for more!
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 1, 2010 9:26:41 GMT -8
They head towards Ponyland with Molly and Danny and their families:
Megan: So will they know me?
Windwhistler: Yeah. They ask about you all the time. *They head to Paradise Estate* Here we are Megan. *She hears a commotion and sees the baby pegacorns*
Megan: Hi.
Luna: Hi Megan. Windwhistler told us all about you. *Megan still looks sad* Why Megan so sad?
Celestia: Yeah.
Megan: Your mom died in my arms.
Celestia: What was she like Megan? (Here's where the description of Daydancer comes in)
Megan: She was beautiful. She had a blue coat. A magnificent horn. And beautiful wings.
Celestia: Like mine?
Luna: No like mine.
Megan: Why are you fighting? You both are beautiful. You both resemble your mom in a way. Please don't fight.
Celestia: Sorry Megan.
Luna: Yeah Sorry Megan. *Hugs her*
Megan: That's better. What would you mother think if she saw you fighting? *Just then an ill wind is felt* What the? *Sees a ghost image of Tyrak* Tyrak?
Tyrak: Hahahaha. Thought you got rid of me huh? Hm now to find a suitable body to give my powers to. *Looking at the twins* One of them should do.
Megan: Watch out Celestia. *Tyrak lunges after her*
Luna: Sister. *She pushes Celestia out of the way and Tyrak enters her body*
Megan: Luna?
Tyrak: *As Luna* Hahahaha. There is no Luna. Just Tyrak. Now what to call myself? *Looks at her body* She's black like midnight. And I'm like a nightmare. *Gets an evil glimmer in her eye* I got it. Say hello to Nightmare Moon.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 27, 2010 14:56:43 GMT -8
Baby Lickety-Split: Turn her back Tyrak.
Megan: Baby Lickety-Split. Look at you. You're grown up.
Baby Lickety-Split: Yes. Now then Tyrak let that baby's body go or else feel the wrath of Sailor Milky Way.
Nightmare Moon: Heh. Do your worst.
Baby Lickety-Split: You asked for it Tyrak. *Gets out her staff* Milky Way Power. *Transforms into Sailor Milky Way* Megan now.
Megan: Alright. Rainbow of Light and Rainbow of Hope do your thing. *Opens the lockets and they gather around Milky Way*
Sailor Milky Way: Milky Way Princess Crisis Power. *She once again dons on the rainbow tiara and dress* Ha now what Tyrak.
Nightmare Moon: Hahaha. Now I'll. Ugh. *He starts cringing* Stupid baby pony. Be lost in the darkness.
Luna: You no hurt Megan. She like a mommy to me.
Nightmare Moon: I said vanish.
Luna: No!
Megan: Now Milky Way while he's arguing with Luna's spirit.
Milky Way: Right. *Holds up her hooves* Megan I learned a new ability while you were away. Watch and learn. *Holds up her hooves and they start glowing* Rainbow Star Illumination! *The stars gather round Nightmare Moon and she screams bloody murder*
Nightmare Moon: No! Not again. *Tyrak disperses from Luna's body*
Luna: *Crying on the ground* I sorry Megan. I sorry Celestia.
Megan: Its O.K. You were just taken over by him. *Tyrak is heard laughing again* Don't you ever give up?
Tyrak: Not till I have done what I should have done. *Picks up Milky Way* Heheheh. Now try something funny.
Milky Way: He's pulling my tiara apart. Megan stop him.
Megan: Stop Tyrak if you know what's good for you.
Tyrak: Goodbye Rainbow of Light. Hahahaha. *The tiara breaks in half and there on the ground lay 6 stones*
Megan: No. No! You..... you beast. Your a monster you hear. A monster.
Milky Way: I have 1 more attack left in me. Milky Way Star Storm. *Blasts the weakened Tyrak and he vanishes* Let's go see the Moochick.
Megan: Right.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 27, 2010 16:44:58 GMT -8
They head to Mr. Moochick's.
Megan: Mr. Moochick.
Mr. Moochick: Oh dear. Oh my.
Megan: What's wrong?
Mr. Moochick: I feel it. The rainbow's magic. Its split.
Megan: Its my fault.
Baby Lickety-split: It was destroyed by Tyrak.
Mr. Moochick: This is terrible. If it was destroyed then there is no hope.
Megan: Its broken into 6 pieces. *shows the stones*
Mr. Moochick: Then all hope isn't lost. If 6 friends with the elements help each other then maybe it can be repaired.
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I can't wait to see what will happening with Baby Celestia and Baby Luna. I guess you'll jump long time soon.