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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 3, 2010 10:02:15 GMT -8
This is a story (No not based on any of the stories I'm making or Friendship is magic) about two sisters. They never got along. Daylight Star loved the day. While Midnight Star loved the night. It was vice versa for both. Daylight Star hated the night because it was too scary. Midnight Star hated the day because it was too bright. Daylight Star was a beautiful Pegasi with a body full of golden hair. Midnight Star was a pegasi with dark hair and a dark body. But can you believe it? They are twins. We start our story one fine day in the royal palace. They are of course royal offspring of Queen Majesty. They are watching the war going on outside. Would they put their differences aside to fight for their mom? Find out now:
Daylight Star: I hate war. It leads to too much bloodshed.
Midnight Star: I love war. Just seeing soldiers fall to the ground dying in their own pool of blood. *They start arguing back and forth*
Queen Majesty: Girls.
Daylight Star: Daddy always said "If we don't need to fight we can make peace" *Sticking her tongue out*
Queen Majesty: Girls.
Midnight Star: Yeah and where is daddy now huh? Dead that's where.
Queen Majesty: *Practically yelling at the top of her lungs* Girls!
Daylight Star and Midnight Star: Yes mom.
Queen Majesty: What would your dad think seeing you two fight. He's probably rolling in his grave listening to you two. *Sighs*
Daylight Star: She started it.
Midnight Star: Did not. You're always saying "I hate war." and all that.
Daylight Star: Well I do hate war and I hate night.
Midnight Star: You mean you hate me.
Daylight Star: I never said that!
Queen Majesty: To your rooms now! Until you two can get along you two are grounded! *They both hang their head in shame and walk off to their rooms* Oh King Majestic what am I gonna do with those two? *Looking at a picture of a pegasi with a golden hue coat and black hair* I remember the day I told you that we were expecting twins. *Sighs*
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 3, 2010 10:43:36 GMT -8
Later that day Daylight Star and Midnight Star come out:
Daylight Star: Mama. I.... I know we might still be grounded. Sorry about before.
Midnight Star: Yeah.
Queen Majesty: Its O.K. You two are like night and day. But one can't be without the other. I mean so many things that happen in the day are nice. Flowers, rainbows, nice summer days. And night is nice too. Full moons, stars. All kinds of things.
Daylight Star: Tell us about dad. What was he like?
Queen Majesty: Well he brought a smile to everyone in the room. He was a magnificent pegasi.
Midnight Star: How did he die? You never told us that.
Queen Majesty: He was stabbed during an initiation of a knight. See the dark pony knight from the Dark Kingdom had wanted him to fight him. He refused. Now listen if you don't wanna know what really happened then don't listen.
Daylight Star: Go ahead.
Queen Majesty: He was about to dub a knight when it happened. The dark knight lunged at me.
Past:
Dark Knight: If you do not wish to fight me then I shall kill your wife.
Queen Majesty: Your father knew you two were on the way and if the knight succeeded he wouldn't only lose me but you two as well. So he pushed me out of the way and took the sword on full force. He bled to death. As for the Dark Knight he was beheaded for killing the king. I'll never forget your father's last words.
King Majestic: I love you. Take care of our daughters.
Queen Majesty: That's when he died. And your right Daylight Star he did say "If we don't need to fight we can make peace"
Back in the present Daylight Star and Midnight Star are sobbing over the loss of their dad:
Daylight Star: He was a brave king wasn't he?
Queen Majesty: He sure was.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 4, 2010 13:48:28 GMT -8
Just then a soldier comes up:
Soldier: Your majesty we have captured a knight pony from the dark kingdom. Shall I bring him in for questioning?
Queen Majesty: If you wish. *Two soldiers bring in a dark pony knight who looks very agitated* So this scum was captured eh?
Soldier: He was your majesty. It took five ponies to take him down.
Queen Majesty: Remove his helmet. *They do and Majesty gasps* You!
Dark Knight: Heh heh. Your recognize my face huh? You knew my daddy.
Queen Majesty: He was beheaded because he killed the king. That was unlawful. Blackblade deserved to die.
Dark Knight: And me as well? I have done no wrong as of yet.
Queen Majesty: No. But you belong to Blackblade's clan. They are guilty of treason, mutiny and for killing kings.
Dark Knight: But I am but a lowly knight to you eh? *Knocks the soldiers down who are holding him and holds Midnight Star hostage with a sword* If you wish to see your precious daughter again you will surrender the throne to our king.
Daylight Star: Let my sister go dammit.
Dark Knight: Such words from a young pony as yourself. You have 24 hours to decide Queen Majesty. If you do not cooperate I will see that your daughter meets her end. *Runs through the palace*
Queen Majesty: First your father now your sister. What am I doing wrong?
Daylight Star: Who was that pony?
Queen Majesty: He is the descendant of Blackblade. He is our sworn enemy. In fact your father was of Blackblade's family.
Daylight Star: Really?
Queen Majesty: Sit down. Its time I told you how we met. See I was in the palace garden as a young pegasi. He was to kill the princess as his first mission to becoming a king.
Back in the past:
Majestic: *Going in and sees the princess playing in the garden* Heh heh there she is. *Walks up to her* Hello fair princess.
Majesty: Hi. Wanna play?
Majestic: No. I'm here to kill you dear princess. *She cowers in the corner* Now I shall do what I came here for.
Queen Majesty: He lifted his sword to kill me..... And then he saw me crying.
Majestic: Oh no don't do that. *She starts bawling* Aw man. I knew it. I can't do anything right. Try to slay a dragon. Can't do that. Try to save a damsel can't do that. And now I can't kill a princess. I'm worthless.
Majesty: But you said you wanted to kill me.
Majestic: Damn these laws over at my kingdom. They aren't right. Slaying innocent dragons. Killing princesses when they have no grudge against us. I wish we could change the laws.
Majesty: You have a kind heart.
Majestic: Yeah and where will that lead me? Dead that's where. *Majesty cuts herself not so much to where its a deep wound but enough to where she can get some blood out* What are you doing?
Majesty: Take my dress and tell your king you killed me. Let this be proof that you did and you won't have to worry. *Spreads blood all over the dress she has with her* And speak nothing of our meeting here.
Majestic: Thanks princess Majesty.
Majesty: Your welcome.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 4, 2010 17:33:05 GMT -8
Queen Majesty: I heard nothing from Majestic. I figured A. He was killed because they found out the truth or B. He really wasn't a good pony and became an evil king. Then new broke out that Prince Majestic had left the Dark Kingdom. I knew then that had to be the same pony. A few years later my mom and dad wanted me to marry someone. That day Majestic visited me. I told him I was to be wed. He said he wanted to marry me so I asked my parents approval:
Majesty: Mom, dad.
King Titan: Yes my princess. *Gasps at seeing Majestic* Majestic you are not welcome here.
Majestic: I know what my mom and dad have done is unforgivable. But do not judge me. My hands are clean of your daughter's blood.
Queen Trinity: I see. There's only one thing I wanna know Majesty. Years ago you hurt your hand. You said it was an accident. Tell us the truth.
Majesty: I did it so they thought I was dead. I'm sorry.
King Titan: Then its true. Majestic isn't truly evil otherwise he would've killed you when he had a chance. Then we accept our daughter's choice if she chooses to marry Prince Majestic.
Majesty: Yes. Oh. Um would you do the honors?
Majestic: I have been waiting all this time to ask this. Majesty will you marry me?
Majesty: Yes.
Back in the present
Queen Majesty: Since then the dark kingdom wanted to kill me and your father. *Sighs* But why prince Fireraiser?
Daylight Star: Fireraiser?
Queen Majesty: He's the young pony who took your sister. He was so nice.
Meanwhile at the Dark Kingdom:
Midnight Star: Let go of me you big meanie.
Fireraiser: Not a chance. *Walks up to his mother* I have the one called Midnight Star.
Fireraiser's mother: Good very good. Take her to the dungeon. I'll deal with her later.
Fireraiser: You got it. *He takes her down to the dungeon* In you go. *Sees another figure* Here's some company for you dear brother. *Locks the door and evilly laughs as he walks away*
Pony: You must be Daylight Star.
Midnight Star: I'm her twin Midnight Star.
Pony: I see. Seems as if both our families have twins. *The pony shows his face* As you have guessed I am Earthraiser's twin brother.
Midnight Star: Earthraiser?
Pony: Yes. He uses my name to do unspeakable things. You must be the daughter of Majestic and Majesty.
Midnight Star: Yes. My dad......
Pony: Yes I heard. My dad did an unspeakable thing killing your dad. Even if he was aiming for your mom.
Midnight Star: So your the real Fireraiser?
Fireraiser: Yes. Now listen. I can help you out if you want.
Midnight Star: Sure.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 6, 2010 9:43:40 GMT -8
They make a plan to escape through the catacombs:
Fireraiser: This is where we are. And this is a secret tunnel through here. *Midnight Star looks at the pony awkwardly* What?
Midnight Star: Why haven't you removed your helmet Fireraiser? Are you so ashamed to be known as Fireraiser?
Fireraiser: Oh I would take this off except for one minor detail. *Points to his helmet and it has a lock on it* This lock renders me from doing so.
Midnight Star: Who did that to you?
Fireraiser: My brother. My mom has been tricked into thinking your family is at war with us. He dyed his hair red to make it look like mine. And he's a pegasi.
Midnight Star: I wonder. *Looks at the lock* I got it. *Takes a hairpin out of her beautful hair* Now hold still. I'm gonna pick that lock. *Starts twisting the hairpin and with a "click" the lock unlocks* Now take it off. *Fireraiser takes the helmet off and he is a magnificent pegasi with red hair and a black streak* You are handsome Fireraiser.
Fireraiser: I am at that. *Blushes at her words* But I do have my dad's traits. A black streak.
Midnight Star: Its O.K. Your beautiful no matter what. *He blushes again* Sh. Someone's coming. *A young pegasi is seen. Its Fireraiser's younger sister*
Fireraiser: Waterraiser.
Waterraiser: I brought you two some food. Its terrible what mom has done under your evil twin Fireraiser.
Fireraiser: Its O.K. Waterraiser I need your help. I wanna escape but need some help. Can you do that?
Waterraiser: Sure.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 7, 2010 21:04:21 GMT -8
Waterraiser: You must be princess Midnight Star. *Bows gracefully*
Midnight Star: Please there's no need for that. Your royalty too. So why are you guys named after elements?
Fireraiser: Can't show you yet. *Waterraiser unlocks the cell* Let's go. *They head down the catacombs and its dark* O.K. now watch. Fire. *Fire comes out of his hooves and lights a torch*
Midnight Star: Wow. So Waterraiser? Do you have power over water then?
Waterraiser: Uh huh. What can you do Midnight Star?
Midnight Star: Nothing. I have no traits.
Fireraiser: Only those of the magical arts know how to use spells like this.
Midnight Star: But my dad was from the Dark Kingdom.
Fireraiser: Maybe your powers haven't kicked in yet. You are half Light Kingdom after all. (Yep Light and Dark. Cool huh? You probably were wondering why Midnight Star and Daylight Star were so different. Well there you go)
Waterraiser: Now when you reach the end here a Bushwoolie will escort you out.
Midnight Star: Thanks Waterraiser.
Waterraiser: Make sure my brother gets to the throne room before they attack your kingdom Midnight Star.
Midnight Star: Right. *They head deeper and just as she said they see a bushwoolie* Hi.
Bushwoolie: Sh. The queen might hear you. She's in with Fireraiser's evil twin. We must hurry. *They go deeper and come to an opening with a door* Here I make my leave. *He does*
Fireraiser: O.K. Midnight Star. *They head in and Eartraiser gasps*
Earthraiser: You. I thought I locked you up in the dungeon impostor.
Fireraiser: I'm not the impostor you are. Mom its me.
Earthraiser: He's lying mom.
Darkstar: Your lying. *Midnight Star sees something*
Fireraiser: What's wrong mama? Don't you know your own son?
Midnight Star: Time to put a stop to this. *Lunges at Earthraiser who cries in terror. She grabs a medallion around his neck, throws it to the ground and breaks it into millions of pieces*
Darkstar: Whoa. What's going on here? I had the weirdest dream. *She looks at the boys* Which is which? *Fireraiser takes his armor off and so does Earthraiser* I'm so confused.
Earthraiser: Then a contest it shall be. The winner is the true Fireraiser. The loser is a fake and will die for treason.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 9, 2010 20:26:18 GMT -8
Fireraiser: What kind?
Earthraiser: Hm.
Midnight Star: There's gotta be a way. *Thinks back to what Fireraiser said* Wait. Look at their backs. One of them has a black streak all the way down.
Darkstar: Who is this pegasi anyway?
Earthraiser: She is a spy sent from the Light Kingdom mom.
Darkstar: Hm. A spy. She doesn't look like a spy. Son take off your armor and impostor take off your armor. If this is true then my real son has a streak just like his father. The wretched pony he was. *Earthraiser shakes his head* You dare to defy your mom and your queen. Take it off or I shall have you thrown out for betrayal. Or worse. *He does and sure enough there's a black streak* See impostor my son has a black streak.
Earthraiser: That's why I shook my head mom. You'd figure out soon enough.
Midnight Star: Hm. *Thinks to herself "What else can be known about these two that makes them so different? I got it. I bet you just like me and Daylight Star they are very different* Dark Star ask your sons to perform their magic for you. Is it not true that the pegasis here know magic?
Dark Star: It is. Alright.
Midnight Star: Ask them both to cast fire. *Thinks to herself "Try and weasel out of this faker"*
Dark Star: Cast fire.
Fireraiser: With pleasure.
Earthraiser: *Reluctantly* With pleasure.
Fireraiser and Earthraiser: Fire! *A blazing fire is seen coming from Fireraiser's hooves while Earthraiser has nothing*
Dark Star: Seize that impostor.
Earthraiser: How did you know?
Midnight Star: Simple. Your brother Fireraiser can use fire. You on the other hand can't. *The guards come in and Midnight Star sprinkles water on Earthraiser and the black streak washes off* See?
Dark Star: What to do with him?
Earthraiser: Kill me. I said the traitor would be beheaded for treason. You know who the real son is. *Hangs his head in shame*
Midnight Star: Wait. *Thinking to herself "Dad was right. If there's no need to fight then we can make peace"* Don't behead him. It wouldn't be right.
Dark Star: True. Earthraiser instead of beheading you I banish you from our kingdom. You are hereby exiled and are no longer my son.
Midnight Star: Well guess that's the non-violent way. *Earthraiser smirks* What's that for?
Earthraiser: Stupid pony. *Laughs maniacally* Haven't you figured out by now mom? I am not your son at all. I killed your son years ago. The Earthraiser you knew is dead. Or at least he should be. He is in the dungeon downstairs looking as pitiful as his old man. By the way. That knight that was sent out wasn't your dad Fireraiser. It was mine. For I am the son of Dark Fire.
Midnight Star: I knew it.
Dark Star: That wizard was your father? I had him banished for trying to take the throne.
Earthraiser: Just so you know I am not Earthraiser. I am *A puff of smoke is seen and there stands a dark unicorn* Dark Earth. The unicorn.
Dark Star: So its true. You were in disguise.
Dark Earth: Yes. Mwahahaha.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 11, 2010 21:34:02 GMT -8
Dark Earth: Now I shall destroy both Light and Dark Kingdoms.
Dark Star: Seize him. *He disappears using unicorn magic laughing evilly* We have to stop him.
Fireraiser: This can't be true. My brother has to be alive. I can feel it. Mom let's head to the dungeon.
Dark Star: Yes let's. *They do and see no sign of her son* He's not here.
Midnight Star: *Leaning against a wall* Then where is heeeeee....... *Suddenly Midnight Star disappears but a pathway is seen* I found a path.
Pony: Who is there?
Fireraiser: Brother?
Earthraiser: Fireraiser. Am I glad to hear your voice. That dumb wizard's son forgot one important thing. I have friends. The Bushwoolies. They put a pile of bones shaped like me to fool Dark Earth and kept me safe from him.
Midnight Star: It was I who found the passageway Earthraiser.
Earthraiser: So its true. Uncle Dark Fire wasn't our uncle after all.
Dark Star: I knew something was fishy about that unicorn.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 12, 2010 18:54:34 GMT -8
Midnight Star: So your my.....
Dark Star: No. We are two different tribes. We aren't related. But we can be allies.
Midnight Star: I'd like that. So would my mom. Let's go warn them. *They head out with the help of the bushwoolies* Thanks.
Bushwoolie: It is I who should thank you. I am Knight wisher.
Midnight Star: Why?
Knight Wisher: You stopped that evil wizard. We owe our thanks. Now to your kingdom and hurry. *They head inside via the catacombs* Good luck.
Queen Majesty: Midnight Star. I thought.
Midnight Star: I'm O.K. thanks to Fireraiser. The Fireraiser who kidnapped me was an impostor.
Queen Majesty: As I thought. And you must be Earthraiser.
Earthraiser: No need to recognize me ma'am.
Queen Majesty: I heard from the bushwoolies that you were captured by Dark Fire. It is not your fault. Its that wizard who is at fault.
Earthraiser: Speaking of him. He's planning an attack right now as we speak.
Queen Majesty: Then we should rally the troops.
Midnight Star: Sister I know you hate war.
Daylight Star: Yes but what that wizard has done is unforgivable. We should stop him.
Queen Majesty: Then its settled. *She sees Queen Dark Star* Queen Dark Star.
Dark Star: Let me apologize for doing such harsh things under that wizard.
Queen Majesty: *Shaking her head* No need. You weren't at fault.
Dark Star: Then banish me.
Daylight Star: But you did nothing wrong.
Queen Majesty: I will not banish you. I would like to make an alliance like we once had way before the war broke out. The one our ancestors had.
Dark Star: O.K. *She and Queen Majesty shake hooves in agreement* Then a peace treaty it shall be.
Queen Majesty: And our daughters and sons?
Dark Star: I think Daylight Star is making tattletale signs at Earthraiser. I think she's in love with him.
Queen Majesty: And same with Fireraiser and Midnight Star. I got it. If we survive this they shall be married if they so choose. That will seal our alliance.
Daylight Star: Well Earthraiser is kind of cute.
Midnight Star: And so is Fireraiser. And you did get proposed to by one of their kin.
Fireraiser: If it pleases the queens. *They both nod* Midnight Star. If we survive Dark Earth's attacks will you marry me?
Earthraiser: Will you marry me too Daylight Star?
Midnight and Daylight Star: Yes!
Queen Majesty: Then after we defeat Dark Earth you four will be married.
Dark Star: And in the most beautiful palace garden. And the reception will be here.
Queen Majesty: Good idea.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 13, 2010 8:24:20 GMT -8
Midnight Star: Now to business.
Queen Majesty: Yes. To the task at hand. We have to stop Dark Earth somehow.
Daylight Star: There is. The prophecy.
Queen Majesty: But that's an old prophecy my dear.
Daylight Star: It can't be. It has to be true. *Thinks* Wait. The medallion he has around his neck.
Midnight Star: I broke it.
Daylight Star: Good. At least half of beating him is done. Now we have to find it. *Looks through books* Ah here it is. The one thing that can stop Dark Earth. *Pushes a button on a wall* Here we go I hope. *The wall turns and inside a locket (I know what your thinking but no this has nothing to do with Megan)* The rainbow of light. Just like in the prophecies.
Dark Star: Never in all my years being queen have I known where that was. *Just then evil laughter is heard. Its Dark Earth*
Dark Earth: Hahahaha. Insulate fools. I have the powers to defeat you.
Midnight Star: Sorry Dark Earth but there's no way.
Dark Earth: Earthraiser. Your alive?
Earthraiser: Alive and well Dark Earth
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Post by battlefield on Nov 13, 2010 9:23:48 GMT -8
I'm really enjoying this story ;D
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Post by sunstar on Nov 13, 2010 15:57:41 GMT -8
Same here!
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 13, 2010 20:26:51 GMT -8
Dark Earth: The rainbow of light? Argh.
Daylight Star: Yeah. *Opens the locket but the rainbow does nothing* What the?
Dark Star: Oh man.
Dark Earth: Hahaha. Now to kill the princes and princesses of both kingdoms. Whose first? *Looks at Midnight Star* It all started with you so your first. *Starts casting a spell* This will kill you good.
Earthraiser: Midnight Star!!!!!! *He lunges forth and knocks Midnight Star out of the way and is hit by the magic and falls to the ground covered in blood*
Midnight Star: Earthraiser. Gr. *The rainbow reacts* What the?
Daylight Star: Wait. I think I know what's going on. The rainbow is reacting to us two. Sister let's do this.
Midnight Star: Got it. *They both touch the rainbow and a light is seen and suddenly not two pegasis are seen but one*
Dark Earth: No! It can't be.
Pegasi: It is Dark Earth. I am Rainbow Star.
Dark Earth: No it can't be. *They fight and Rainbow Star gets the upper hand* Please have mercy.
Rainbow Star: Get out. Get out and never return to these kingdoms.
Dark Earth: You got it. *He smirks and lunges at Rainbow Star to destroy her but she sees it and she smirks and he stops* Ugh.
Rainbow Star: Ha. *What is seen is a bloody sword stuck in Earthraiser's chest. Its not lethal but he can't move*
Dark Earth: Curse you.
Rainbow Star: What shall I do your majesties? *She looks over and sees them with their thumbs out (you know like in Julius Ceasar's time where he would point up if he wanted the person to live and down to kill him) and they point their thumbs down* Hm. Guess I'd better behead you. From this day forth the unicorns of the dark realms are banished from these kingdoms. *Cuts Dark Earth's head off and his body lays motionless on the floor and his head in Rainbow Star's hand looking like "No!!!!!!"* Its done. *She turns back to Midnight Star and Daylight Star and Midnight Star runs over to Earthraiser*
Midnight Star: Hang in there Earthraiser. Please. *With tears in her eyes*
Earthraiser: I'm sorry for all my family did under Dark Earth's spell.
Midnight Star: No don't talk. You need your strength.
Earthraiser: I love you. *Dies in Midnight Star's hands*
Midnight Star: No!!!!!! Please. *Starts crying on Earthraiser's body*
What will happen to Earthraiser? Is he dead? Find out in the thrilling conclusion of Twin Sister different as night and day.
To Be concluded.
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Post by djlamar2 on Nov 14, 2010 9:22:30 GMT -8
And now the conclusion:
Daylight Star: Come on sister. *She shakes her head*
Midnight Star: How can I live without my Earthraiser. You were right sister. All that war leads to is death. *Just then a figure is seen in front of Midnight Star. Its Majestic's ghost* Daddy?
Majestic: This Pegasi gave his life for you. *She nods* There is another aspect of the rainbow of light. Its not just a weapon. Daylight Star bring it over. *She does* Now release it. *She opens the locket and the rainbow spins around Earthraiser and all his wounds heal and he opens his eyes*
Earthraiser: Am I alive? *Midnight Star runs up and hugs him*
Midnight Star: I thought I lost you. You crazy fool. You risked your life for me.
Earthraiser: People do crazy things when they're in love. *Looks at Dark Earth's decapitated body* Its finally over. *Just then another Pegasi is seen. Its Blackblade*
Blackblade: I am proud of you my son. From this day forward there is no dark kingdom just light. The two kingdoms have made peace.
Queen Majesty: Then let a decree be declared. Servant. *A pegasi is seen* Write this down:
The decree reads:
From this day forward there will never be a war between the Blackblade family or the Majestic family. Anyone who opposes this law will be banished from this kingdom. And let it be known that the dark and light kingdom are as one.
Signed,
Queen Majestic, Queen Dark Star, Princess Daylight Star, Princess Midnight Star, Prince Earthraiser and Prince Fireraiser.
Queen Majesty: Now I believe we have a wedding to plan for.
Later that week:
Preacher: I now pronounce you husbands and wives. You may kiss the brides. *They do and everyone cheers*
Queen Majesty: I'm glad we're both one kingdom now.
Dark Star: Same here.
As the scene breaks from the wedding the scene goes out toward the castle walls. There in big letters reads:
Rainbow Kingdom.
The End.
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Post by battlefield on Nov 16, 2010 18:36:34 GMT -8
That was a good story.
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