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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 29, 2010 20:36:51 GMT -8
This will only be the prologue. Of course it takes place in Friendship is Magic so there will be the theme. First a recap of things that happened in The Rainbow of Light's Last Stand:
Megan: I can't let her die.
Tyrak: Now I'll do something I should have done years ago.
Luna: I sorry Megan.
And now the prologue:
It had been 15 years since Luna and Celestia were born. It had also been that long since Luna was possessed by Tyrak. Of course she had the problem Mr. Moochick had talked about. Our story begins with Twilight Sparkle looking through her books:
Twilight Sparkle: Boring. Read that.
Spike: Twilight what are you doing? *Buried in the books*
Twilight Sparkle: Its been quiet Spike. Too quiet. *Just then a rumbling is felt and heard* You feel that Spike?
Spike: Yeah. That was no normal earthquake.
My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Theme:
My Little Pony. My Little Pony. Ah ah ah ah. My Little Pony.
Twilight Sparkle: I used to wonder what friendship could be.
My Little Pony.
Twilight Sparkle: Until you all shared this magic with me.
Rainbow Dash: Big adventure.
Pinkie Pie: Tons of fun.
Rarity: A beautiful heart.
Apple Jack: Brave, full and strong.
Fluttershy: Amazing kindness. Its an amazing feat.
Twilight Sparkle: And magic makes it all complete.
My Little Pony. You know you are my very best friend.
In big white letters after the theme you see the words: A greater threat.
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Post by Al1701 on Dec 30, 2010 3:25:49 GMT -8
A bit short, but the best teasers usually are. I'll keep an eye on this one.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 30, 2010 17:49:11 GMT -8
Thanks. You know what I'm gonna go ahead and start this. So here comes part of part 1:
Meanwhile outside Ponyville, Ponyland also feels this rumbling:
Wishing Star: More rumbling again. Do you think it could be Nightmare Moon again?
Magic Star: Has to be. No1 would make that much rumbling. Better tell Twilight Sparkle. *Yes the ponies know of Twilight Sparkle. They do know of Celestia and Luna of course*
Meanwhile back in Ponyville Twilight Sparkle is having Spike make a letter to Princess Celestia:
Twilight Sparkle: Spike make a letter. Dear Princess Celestia, knowing you you have felt these tremors. I'm afraid it might be Nightmare Moon again. Please respond back. Your student, Twilight Sparkle. Send it Spike.
Spike: Right away. *Just then Windwhistler comes in*
Twilight Sparkle: Windwhistler. Good to see you.
Windwhistler: No time to talk. We need to talk to Celestia. We think it might be Nightmare Moon again.
Twilight Sparkle: I had the same feeling. *Spike burps up a new letter from Celestia* Just in time. *She opens it* Dear Twilight Sparkle. I had the same feeling. But it can't be my sister. We took care of that. I want you to get Megan. Signed, Princess Celestia. Megan? Where have I heard that before?
Windwhistler: You wouldn't know her Twilight Sparkle. She was here before you were even born. Too bad the Rainbow leading to her house has been gone. *Spike burps up another letter*
Twilight Sparkle: It says, "Use the Magic of Friendship" Good idea.
Windwhistler: Worth a shot.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 30, 2010 19:54:22 GMT -8
Twilight Sparkle: Could she mean all my friends? Worth a try. *Goes out* Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack. We need to head to Ponyland.
Pinkie Pie: Ponyland. I haven't been there in years. *Starts bouncing around*
Windwhistler: Settle down Pinkie Pie this is serious. Nightmare Moon might be coming back. We need my friend Megan.
Applejack: Well tarnation Windwhistler why you standing around here for?
Windwhistler: We need another rainbow to get her here.
Rarity: Well then let's make 1 for her.
Windwhistler: Right. *They head to where the rainbow might have been* Here's hoping. Any1 wanna go get her?
Rainbow Dash: Leave it to me Windwhistler.
Windwhistler: Got it. Now do your thing.
Twilight Sparkle: Alright guys gather round. *They all do* Magic.
Rarity: Beauty.
Applejack: Braveness.
Rainbow Dash: Loyalty.
Fluttershy: Kindness.
Pinkie Pie: Fun. *The stones around their necks glow and a new rainbow appears*
Windwhistler: It worked. Now Rainbow Dash if you see Megan tell her we are in trouble again.
Rainbow Dash: Got it. *She heads off*
Windwhistler: Now we wait.
Meanwhile at Megan's house:
Crystal: What a beautiful night huh T.J? *She looks up* Mom look a shooting star.
Megan: It can't be. The rainbow to Ponyland is gone. *Rainbow Dash is heard screaming and she falls into the well like Firefly did the first time* It is. Its a pony. *Starts bringing her up* Your not Windwhistler or Firefly.
Rainbow Dash: Are you Megan?
Megan: Yes. And you are?
Rainbow Dash: Rainbow Dash. Nice to meet you. *Shakes herself off* And who's this little girl?
Megan: My daughter Crystal.
Rainbow Dash: Anyway. I have come because of a crisis Megan.
Megan: Nightmare Moon?
Rainbow Dash: I don't know. *Megan looks at the stone around Rainbow Dash's neck*
Megan: The Rainbow of Light? I thought it was destroyed.
Rainbow Dash: Oh this thing. I got it from the Everfree forest.
Megan: Then there's hope. Let's go.
Rainbow Dash: What about your daughter?
Megan: Can't leave her.
Rainbow Dash: Be right back.
Megan: Bring some other Pegasies too Rainbow Dash. I bet my brother and sister would like to come.
Rainbow Dash: Will do.
What will happen? Will Megan be enough? And who is this new threat? Find out more in part 2.
To be continued.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 31, 2010 14:41:52 GMT -8
Part 2:
Rainbow Dash went to get some of her family:
Rainbow Dash: I would introduce you to them all but time is short. Now who are these brother and sister you talk about?
Megan: They are right here. I got them while you were gone. Molly and Danny this is Rainbow Dash. Also meet Christine and Tammy.
Rainbow Dash: Nice to meet you guys. Aw. The little 1 seems a bit shy.
Megan: Don't worry Tammy. Remember what I told you?
Tammy: What about that scary 1 Megan?
Megan: She's not Nightmare Moon trust me. I know Luna and she is definitely not Luna. Let's go Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow Dash: But, What if we can't stop Nightmare Moon if it is her?
Megan: You know I was skeptical about my first trip to Ponyland but a friend of mine helped me get over that. Rainbow Dash I have 1 thing to say. Pony Feathers.
Dancing on Air (Megan trying to reassure Rainbow Dash):
Megan: They'll be dancing on air when they see me. Dancing on air with glee.
Rainbow Dash: I doubt they'll be celebrating when they see...
Megan: Its only me?
Rainbow Dash: Yeah.
Megan: They'll do cartwheels and more when they see me. They're hopes will start to rise.
Rainbow Dash: From what their anticiapating. Their in for a big surprise.
Megan: They'll be floating higher than the clouds.
Rainbow Dash: They'll be gloating laughing right out loud.
Megan: The sight of me will send spirits flying.
Rainbow Dash: One or two may burst out crying.
Megan: Why can't you believe? We're gonna be great.
Rainbow Dash: But Megan.
Megan: Trust me. Rainbow Dash I'm a dream come true. Bet your friends all think so too. I'll be the answer to their every prayer.
Rainbow Dash: Time will tell if we'll come through.
Megan: But just imagine if we do.
Rainbow Dash: They'll be dancing.
Megan: Prancing.
Rainbow Dash and Megan: Dancing on air.
Rainbow Dash: Your right Megan. Thanks.
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Post by djlamar2 on Dec 31, 2010 15:27:33 GMT -8
They head to the palace where Twilight Sparkle and all of them are gathered:
Celestia: I know how troubled you all are. But Rainbow Dash went to see an old friend of mine. She should be here in just a second. *Rainbow Dash comes in with her family and Megan and her family* Megan?
Megan: How do you know my name?
Celestia: *Giggles* Don't you remember silly? Maybe someone else might help refresh your memory. Sis. *Luna comes in* Remember us now Megan?
Megan: I do faintly remember 2 baby ponies with the same hair. *Gasps* Celestia?
Twilight Sparkle: That's princess Celestia if you don't mind.
Celestia: Its O.K. Twilight Sparkle. She delivered me and my sister. You might have heard about her in the books. Megan.
Twilight Sparkle: Megan? The Megan? *Gasps and jumps up and down like Pinkie Pie* Oh my gosh. I'm your biggest fan. Way to trounce those witches not once but three times. I knew I heard that name before. I'm Twilight Sparkle.
Luna: Good to see you Megan.
Megan: Luna. Look at you two. Your not the babies I remember but wow you've grown. And who might these ponies be?
Pinkie Pie: *Running up* I'm Pinkie Pie. I'm so thrilled to meet you. *Giggles*
Rarity: I'm Rarity. Who does your hair? Its absolutely gorgeous.
Megan: Thanks.
Applejack: I'm Applejack. Nice to meet ya.
Megan: Who's that shy little pony there behind you?
Fluttershy: *In a low voice* I...... I'm Fluttershy.
Megan: Huh? I didn't quite get that. Say it again and don't be afraid. I won't hurt you.
Fluttershy: I'm Fluttershy. Nice to meet you. *Squeaks as she holds out her hand*
Megan: What's wrong? Its not dangerous.
Fluttershy: Sorry. I'm kind of shy around people.
Megan: Its O.K. So Princess Celestia. What's up?
Celestia: Please. Don't be so formal my friend. *The rumbling is felt again and an evil laugh can be heard* Here we go again. Its Nightmare Moon.
Luna: Don't let her try to get ahold of me again sis.
Megan: That's not Nightmare Moon. That's.......... *The laughter gets louder*
Windwhistler: It can't be. We vanquished him years ago.
Eerie voice: Ponies.
Megan: I'm afraid so. Its........
Windwhistler and Megan: Wizacus.
Oh man Wizacus is back. What evil plans does he have in store? Find out more in part 3.
To be continued.
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Post by Al1701 on Dec 31, 2010 16:58:37 GMT -8
I know you're writing this in a screenplay format, but could you write out "one" instead of 1?
Other than that, this is looking good. Will more G1's be showing up other than Wind Whistler?
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 1, 2011 10:36:29 GMT -8
yep. Now more with part 3:
Wizacus: Right you are Megan. Hello little ponies.
Apple Bloom: I scared sis.
Wizacus: Aw is the baby pony afraid of me.
Applejack: Don't you come near my sister.
Wizacus: I have a better idea. *Just then he feels a tug. Its Fluttershy* You!
Fluttershy: *At the same tone she had in episode seven* No one. And I mean no one tries to hurt my friends. *Wizacus laughs evilly*
Wizacus: Ha ha ha. What a brave little pony. Take this. *Sends magic at Fluttershy*
Megan: Fluttershy! *Megan pushes Fluttershy out of the way and is hit by the magic and lays motionless*
Wizacus: I'll be back. *He vanishes*
Fluttershy: Megan? *Starts crying* She saved me. *Starts crying on Megan's motionless body* Please don't die. *Her stone glows as it makes Megan's body glow and Megan opens her eyes*
Megan: Fluttershy? Fluttershy why are you crying on me?
Fluttershy: You risked your life to....... *Gasps* Megan! *Hugs her* Why did you save me Megan?
Megan: Any friend of Celestia is my friend.
Fluttershy: Because you saved me you are my friend. *Everyone aws*
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 1, 2011 14:45:23 GMT -8
Megan: Let's ask the Moochick.
Windwhistler: Uh. Megan he's been dead for over two years now.
Megan: Then who can we ask?
Twilight Sparkle: I got it. Zecora.
Megan: Zecora?
Twilight Sparkle: She knows everything.
Megan: Good idea. Where is she?
Fluttershy: In the Everfree Forest.
Megan: Where's that?
Twilight Sparkle: On the edge of Ponyville.
Megan: Got it.
Will Zecora be able to help Megan and her friends? Will they get rid of Wizacus? And what else will happen? Find out in part 4.
To Be continued.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 2, 2011 10:04:40 GMT -8
Part 4:
Meanwhile Wizacus goes to the volcano of Gloom and to his surprise everyone is gone:
Wizacus: So the stories are true eh Hydia? You were vanquished by Nightmare Moon. Not that it matters anymore.
Meanwhile the ponies and Megan enter the Everfree Forest in search of Zecora:
Twilight Sparkle: Be careful Megan. *Pointing to a plant* See that?
Megan: Looks like poison oak.
Twilight Sparkle: Its called Poison Joke. It plays pranks on anyone who touches it. My horn was bent, Pinkie Pie's lips were swollen, Applejack was smaller than Apple Bloom, Rainbow Dash well she was known as Rainbow Crash.
Rainbow Dash: Hey!
Twilight Sparkle: I'm just saying Rainbow Dash. She couldn't control where she went. Rarity's hair was longer. And Fluttershy she had the silliest prank of all on her.*Giggling but clears her throat when Fluttershy gets a frown on her face* Sorry Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Its O.K Twilight. My voice sounded like a guy.
Megan: Wow. *They head deeper and come across Zecora's house* Spooky.
Twilight Sparkle: She's really quite nice.
Zecora: I don't know where to look! Where is that book?!
Fluttershy: Most of the time.
Twilight Sparkle: Zecora. *Knocking on the door*
Zecora: Who might that be? A friend to see me?
Megan: What's with this rhyming?
Twilight Sparkle: Its what she does. Its us Zecora. Twilight Sparkle and the rest. We brought a friend.
Zecora: A friend. Maybe she can tell us how to make amends. *Opens the door*
Megan: Zecora. I'm Megan. I heard you know everything like my friend Mr. Moochick.
Zecora: The Moochick you say. I was his student back in the day.
Megan: Cool. So what book were you looking for Zecora?
Zecora: A book on what has been happening my friend. It might mean the end.
Megan: It does. If we don't do something.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 2, 2011 12:01:34 GMT -8
Megan: What's it look like Zecora?
Zecora: Mr Moochick said it was the Book of Lost secrets my dear. It should be somewhere around here. *Megan starts looking around for it*
Megan: Here you go. *Zecora opens the book and points* O.K. Let's see. Hey he wrote something in here. (Reading) Megan if Zecora my student gives this to you look at page four. O.K. *Turns to page 4* The hope of the Rainbow of Light. But it was broken.
Rainbow Dash: But you said I had a piece of it.
Megan: Yeah. Explain that Zecora.
Zecora: Maybe when the rainbow was broken. It was turned to stone and given to the ponies like Rainbow Dash has spoken.
Megan: True. *Wizacus' laughter is heard* He's here.
Wizacus: Now then. Where is Wishing Star? Tell me?
Megan: No! You'll just turn her into the Staff of unfulfilled wishes again.
Wizacus: Fine. I'll find her myself. *He vanishes*
Megan: Thanks Zecora. We have some business to take care of.
What is his plans for Wishing Star? Find out in part 5.
To be continued.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 3, 2011 12:03:31 GMT -8
Part 5:
Megan: Thanks Zecora. *They head off and head back to Ponyville and Celestia and Luna are holding Wizacus off as good as they can*
Celestia: You'd better leave now Wizacus.
Luna: Yeah if you know what's good for you.
Megan: He's too powerful. We need Sailor Milky Way. *Baby Lickety-Split appears along with Baby Ribbon and Baby Mimic*
Baby Lickety-Split: Someone call my name?
Megan: Baby Lickety-Split.
Baby Lickety-Split: In the flesh.
Baby Ribbon: Don't forget me.
Baby Mimic: And me.
Megan: Cool. *They hold up staffs* Baby Mimic and Baby Ribbon? Your Sailor Scouts too?
Baby Ribbon: Say hello to Sailor Orion.
Baby Mimic: And Sailor Meteor.
Baby Lickety-Split: Ready girls. *They nod* Sailor Moon couldn't be with us so she sent us. Milky Way Star Power.
Baby Ribbon: Orion Power.
Baby Mimic: Meteor power. *Baby Lickety-Split turns into Sailor Milky Way now with a bigger tiara. Baby Mimic turns into a sailor scout with a bright gold dress. And Baby Ribbon turns into a sailor scout with a bright silver dress*
Sailor Milky Way: You've caused a lot of trouble the last time you were here. I'm Sailor Milky Way.
Sailor Orion: Sorry to say this but you will go down. I am Sailor Orion.
Sailor Meteor: You'd better run now Wizacus. I am Sailor Meteor.
Baby Lickety-Split: And in the name of the universe.
All three: We shall punish you.
Megan: Alright.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 3, 2011 15:51:33 GMT -8
Wizacus: Ha. Your nothing without the rainbow of light remember?
Megan: He's right. *The stones around Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy start to shine* What the?
Twilight Sparkle: If they can't handle it on their own then let us help.
Rainbow Dash: Yeah.
Rarity: That big ugly wizard is wreaking havoc on Ponyville making it a mess. I won't stand for it.
Applejack: Darn tooting we're not gonna stand around.
Fluttershy: If he's gonna hurt the little creatures I won't stand for it either.
Sailor Milky Way: Then let him have it.
Twilight Sparkle: Magic.
Rarity: Beauty.
Applejack: Braveness.
Fluttershy: Kindness.
Rainbow Dash: Loyalty.
Pinkie Pie: Fun. *The stones shine and a rainbow is seen*
Megan: The rainbow of light. Its O.K. Good to see you rainbow. *It flies around Wizacus and he screams*
Applejack: Had enough pardner?
Wizacus: I'll be back.
Megan: We'll be ready for you. I hope. *They head into the palace*
Celestia: Now what to do about Wizacus.
Luna: Its hopeless sis.
Celestia: Don't worry Luna.
Megan: She's right. The rainbow of light isn't completely whole. What can we do?
Celestia: There is one hope.
What is this hope Celestia is talking about? And is Wizacus their only worry? Find out in part 6.
To be continued.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 4, 2011 12:39:03 GMT -8
part 6 (Yep halfway point):
Megan: But what is it?
Celestia: Twilight Sparkle do you still have that book on "The Mare in the Moon"?
Twilight Sparkle: Yes. Its in the library why?
Celestia: Take Megan to see it.
Twilight Sparkle: With pleasure. *Windwhistler takes Megan with Twilight Sparkle and they enter a huge library* Here we are. Spike.
Megan: Spike! *Runs up to hug him* Long time no see.
Spike: Same *Grunts while being squished* here Megan.
Megan: So why is Spike with you Twilight Sparkle?
Spike: I help her out.
Megan: Cool.
Twilight Sparkle: Anyway Spike I need to look at the "Mare in the Moon" book.
Spike: Why? Nightmare Moon isn't coming back is she?
Megan: No. But we need to see something.
Spike: No problem.
Twilight Sparkle: Now where did I put that? *Her horn glows as it takes books down* Ah here it is. "Mare in the Moon." Let's see. Nightmare Moon. Night that never ends. Ah here we go. The rainbow. It says, "In order to fully recover the magic lost in the rainbow, six friends must come together" But we did that already. *Reads more* "The heart of Ponyland" The heart of Ponyland?
Megan: The heart of Ponyland of course.
Twilight Sparkle: I don't understand. Who has the heart of Ponyland.
Megan: No silly. Its a place to where the magic of Ponyland is kept in balance.
Twilight Sparkle: Oh. I get it. Like a power source.
Megan: Exactly.
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Post by djlamar2 on Jan 4, 2011 12:52:47 GMT -8
Megan: The princesses should know.
Twilight Sparkle: Then off to the royal palace. *They go back to Celestia's palace* We found it. But we need to bring my friends. We need to go to the Heart of Ponyland.
Celestia: See. I knew you'd find it.
Luna: I want to go. What if they run into trouble?
Celestia: But sis. Its dangerous.
Luna: Please.
Celestia: *Sighs* Fine. But be careful. I am your older sister after all.
Luna: Only by 5 seconds.
Megan: We'll be back as soon as we can figure this out.
Celestia: Right. Good luck.
Megan: Crystal you stay here. That way if anything happens you'll be safe. Same with you and Tammy Christine.
Crystal: Right.
Megan: Let's go. *They head off*
All through the night:
Megan, Danny, Molly and the rest: All through the night Although it's frightening Even thought there's lightning We'll keep pressing forward We'll keep pressing forward All through the night Although it's scary Though it may get hairy We'll keep moving toward our final destination And furthermore, me And all the rest of us We'll never let out fears get the best if us We'll save the day by conquering our fright We'll keep on being brave All through the night All through the night All through the night All through the night All through the night. *They arrive at the palace*
Princess Serena: Megan! *Hugs her* Good to see you.
Megan: Same to you Serena. *Laughter is heard* Not again.
Wizacus: There is no hope for you little ponies. *Laughing evilly*
What will happen? Will they restore the rainbow of light's full power? Find out in part 7.
To be continued.
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