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Post by djlamar2 on May 16, 2011 20:07:07 GMT -8
This is yet another FiM adventure story. Its the festival of the cutie marks (I made it up. Cute huh?) and all the ponies are talking about when they got their cutie marks. But something is wrong. What is it? Find out in this thrilling 6 parter. We start off with the cutie mark crusaders who (Even after tons of failed attempts) are still looking for a way to get their cutie marks. We see them doing yet another crazy stunt:
Sweetie Belle: W...... when Rarity said to look for a way for us to look for our cutie marks elsewhere I don't think she meant this way. *They are seen at the top of a high cliff with a bungee cord strapped onto them*
Scoot-a-loo: Its fine Sweetie Belle. Besides what better way than to go bungee jumping.
Apple Bloom: I don't think sis will approve of this.
Meanwhile down below Rarity is frantically looking around and she bumps into Twilight Sparkle:
Rarity: Have you seen the girls today?
Twilight Sparkle: Yeah they said they were gonna go on top of that mountain and..... Uh oh. If I'm not mistaken they're gonna bungee jump.
Rarity: Mom will kill me if she saw Sweetie Belle do this. Applejack!
Applejack: What's all the ruckus? *They point up and Applejack screams in horror* Are those fillies crazy? They could get killed. Rainbow Dash!
Rainbow Dash: What's up? *She points up and Rainbow Dash looks* Oh its the girls. They are on top of.... Yikes. Scoot-a-loo's mom will get me if there is 1 scratch on her head.
My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Theme:
My little pony. My little pony. Ah ah ah ah ah ah. My little pony.
Twilight Sparkle: I used to wonder what friendship could be.
My little pony.
Twilight Sparkle: Until you all shared this magic with me.
Rainbow Dash: Big adventure.
Pinkie Pie: Tons of fun.
Rarity: A beautiful heart.
Applejack: Brave full and strong.
Fluttershy: Sharing kindness. Its an amazing feat.
Twilight Sparkle: And magic makes it all complete.
My little pony.
Twilight Sparkle: You know you are my very best friend.
Stay tuned for the story.
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Post by Zero on May 17, 2011 0:50:55 GMT -8
*blink* so...now Scoot IS Rainbow Dash's sister?
or.........now im confused
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Post by Bright Glow on May 17, 2011 2:22:35 GMT -8
I guess since Scoot hangs a lot around RD her mother asked RD too look afther her.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 17, 2011 5:53:31 GMT -8
Actually see how I said "Her mom's gonna kill me" That means I meant Scoot-a-loo's mom. Not Rainbow Dash's. Anyway here's part 1.
Part 1:
Rainbow Dash is flying up the mountain to stop them but its too late:
Scoot-a-loo: Wahoo. *They jump off with Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom screaming* What a rush. *They bounce back up and see Rainbow Dash looking at them* That was fun.
Sweetie Belle: Uh Scoot-a-loo.
Scoot-a-loo: Bet ya Rainbow Dash saw it. I know what she'd say. She'd say.
Rainbow Dash: Scoot-a-loo!
Scoot-a-loo: Exactly. *Looks up* Uh oh.
Rainbow Dash: We need to talk. *They head back down the mountain and head to Twilight Sparkle's house* That was dangerous and stupid. What if the rope broke huh?
Applejack: And you know mom wouldn't approve of this either Apple Bloom.
All 3: Sorry.
Applejack: Its alright. At least your safe.
Scoot-a-loo: Any cutie mark yet? *She looks* Nope.
Twilight Sparkle: Your still looking for your cutie mark?
Scoot-a-loo: Yeah. That's why we went bungee jumping.
Rarity: That's why you did that. Well next time try something a little less dangerous.
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Post by Bright Glow on May 17, 2011 7:29:24 GMT -8
I knew it, I knew it Rainbow Dash should just keeping her eyes on Scoot-a loo.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 17, 2011 7:51:00 GMT -8
Meanwhile a black unicorn without a cutie mark is seen looking into a lava pool:
Unicorn: Gr. Look at all those ponies with their "Cutie marks". It makes me sick. Luckily the witches are now gone. *She turns to where we can see her left side and there's no cutie mark* Stella!
Stella: Yes sister. *Another unicorn is seen also without a cutie mark. She's light yellow* What is it Esmerelda?
Esmerelda: You know what I hate more than not having a cutie mark don't you?
Stella: Ponies with cutie marks?
Esmerelda: Exactly. Showing them off at the stupid "Festival of the cutie mark". I'll never forget that day. The day they all made fun of me not having a cutie mark.
In the past:
Young Twilight Sparkle: I got my cutie mark the other day when I was showing off my magic Esmerelda.
Young Esmerelda: Do you think I'll get mine soon?
Young Twilight Sparkle: You can count on it.
Ponies: Look at her. Blank flank. *Esmerelda has a tear in her eye*
Back in the present:
Esmerelda: I'll never forgive them. Calling me a Blank flank. I'll show them. I'll show them all. Tonight at the Festival of the cutie marks I'll cast a spell and everyone with cutie marks will lose them. Then they will be the Blank flanks.
Stella: You sure you wanna do this? Isn't it a bit mean?
Esmerelda: Yeah but that's what they get for being mean to me. *Sees a girl* Who is that?
Stella: Looks like a human. Megan I think is her name.
Esmerelda: Perfect. Now go and talk to this Megan. Tell her to come to the Volcano of Gloom.
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Post by Bright Glow on May 17, 2011 9:22:32 GMT -8
Intresting, but they forget the CMC and Ember don't have their own cutie mark.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 17, 2011 9:31:16 GMT -8
Yep. That will take place later in the story when she finds out that the CMC and Ember doesn't have 1. But that's enough for now. Tomorrow I'll continue the story.
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Post by Zero on May 17, 2011 13:06:03 GMT -8
im getting de-ja-vu here
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Post by Al1701 on May 17, 2011 13:10:00 GMT -8
I know Twilight tried to make a cutie mark (groans) on Applebloom. I wonder what they'll have to do to do the opposite.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 18, 2011 10:03:21 GMT -8
Stella goes to find Megan. She bumps into Pinkie Pie:
Pinkie Pie: Hi Stella.
Stella: Hi Pinkie Pie. Hey have you seen Megan?
Pinkie Pie: Over there by Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scoot-a-loo.
Stella: Thanks. *Under her breath* I don't want to do this.
Esmerelda: *Telepathically* You'll do it or I'll tell them about your little problem.
Stella: You wouldn't dare.
Esmerelda: Just try me. *See since she was a baby unicorn Stella was never good at winking out. Not that she couldn't wink back in like Baby Ribbon was having trouble with when she was a baby. But let's just say that when she winked back in her head would be in 1 place the rest of her body well stayed where she was. Call it a technical fluke*
Stella: Fine. *Goes up to Megan* Hello.
Sweetie Belle: Stella. Good to see you. Megan this is Stella.
Megan: Hi Stella.
Sweetie Bell: She and her sister Esmerelda live where the mean old witches used to.
Megan: Really? What's up Stella?
Stella: Sister asked me to ask you to come to the Volcano of Gloom.
Megan: O.K. Can you take me?
Stella: I uh...... I don't know.
Megan: Please. *Stella sighs*
Stella: Alright but don't laugh. *They go somewhere* Now Megan listen. I have a bit of a problem. I can't wink out very well.
Megan: Aw it can't be that bad can it? *She whimpers* Show me. *She winks out and her legs stay behind* Oh my.
Stella: Go ahead. *Tears well up in her eyes* Go ahead and laugh.
Megan: Why would I laugh. Come on wink back in buddy. *She does but in a different place than her legs* You know I have a friend that had a problem like this. Except she couldn't get her body in all the way. Stella concentrate. Try to become whole again. *She winks out and concentrates and winks back in fully*
Stella: I did it. Megan I have a confession to make.
Esmerelda: *Telepathically and very mad* Don't you dare.
Stella: Shut up sister. Esmerelda is gonna take away everyone's cutie marks with a magic spell. See she and I don't have cutie marks. They called her a Blank flank when she was a baby.
Megan: We have to warn everyone. *The sun sets*
Stella: Oh no. Its time for the Festival of the cutie marks. She's gonna cast the spell on them during it.
Megan: We gotta get there quick.
Will they get there in time? Find out in part 2. To be continued.
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Post by Bright Glow on May 18, 2011 12:14:15 GMT -8
Yay! I can't wait to see if Pinkie Pie will be a depressive pony again if she lost her cutie mark.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 18, 2011 12:46:14 GMT -8
Part 2:
Back in the Volcano of Gloom:
Esmerelda: I don't need Stella. *Laughs maniacally* I don't need anyone. Now for the spell. *Looks in a book* Ah yes here it is.
At the festival:
Celestia: Let the festivities begin.
Back at the Volcano:
Esmerelda: Call me a blank flank will they? Laugh at me not having a cutie mark will they? *Focuses* Now magic spell rid the Ponyland ponies of their cutie marks. Ha ha ha ha. *Dark clouds roll in*
Meanwhile back at the festival everyone is in a panic:
Magic Star: When did those black clouds roll in? *Megan runs up* Megan you look out of breath.
Megan: Water..... I need water. *Gets her a glass of water* Now then. Esmerelda.......
Twilight Sparkle: What about her?
Megan: She's gonna cast a spell...... *Just then Twilight Sparkle's cutie mark starts to fade* Oh no..... its beginning.
Twilight Sparkle: What is? *Megan points at where Twilight Sparkle's cutie mark should be* What about my....... *Twilight Sparkle screams* My cutie mark. Its gone.
Magic Star: Nonsense. I still have my....... *Looks at where hers is at and screams* MY CUTIE MARK! *Laughter can be heard*
Esmerelda: Hello blank flanks.
Twilight Sparkle: Esmerelda? Your behind this?
Esmerelda: Yes I am. Mwahaha.
Twilight Sparkle: Why?
Esmerelda: Oh silly little Twilight. Haven't you already figured it out. They made fun of me in school for not having 1. *Ember comes out*
Ember: This isn't right Esmerelda.
Esmerelda: Ah Ember. One of my many friends with no cutie mark. Why do you protect them? They had theirs and you didn't.
Ember: Even so this isn't right.
Applejack: Yeah. Just because we have 1 and you don't doesn't give you any right to go taking ours away.
Apple Bloom: We don't have cutie marks. Me Sweetie Belle and Scoot-a-loo.
Esmerelda: Then join me you 3. Bet you hate being called blank flanks huh?
Scoot-a-loo: I hate it. I'm in.
Rainbow Dash: Scoot-a-loo!
Scoot-a-loo: See ya later blank flank. *Sticks her tongue out*
Apple Bloom: I'm tired of always being told "I'll get it soon" by my big sister. Well sis how does it feel not having 1 huh?
Applejack: But Apple Bloom.
Apple Bloom: Forget it sis. I don't want to hang around ponies who are mean and call people names. *Whips her tail up*
Applejack: But she called us blank flanks.
Apple Bloom: ONLY BECAUSE YOU CALLED HER THAT FIRST!
Applejack: Oh. *Frowns*
Megan: Apple Bloom shame on you.
Apple Bloom: Shut it. *Sweetie Belle joins them*
Rarity: You too Sweetie Belle?
Sweetie Belle: Yes and what are you gonna do about it? Show off your cutie mark? Oh I forgot. You don't have 1 anymore.
Fluttershy: GET BACK HERE YOU 3! *Yelling again* APOLOGIZE TO YOUR SISTERS AND MENTOR! DON'T MAKE ME USE THE LOOK ON YOU!
All 3: NO!
Megan: I swear if its the last thing we do Esmerelda we will get them back and get my friends' cutie marks back.
Esmerelda: Good luck with that. Bye. *Laughs maniacally as she winks out and the 3 follow her*
Applejack: Now what are we gonna do? *Fluttershy whimpers* Fluttershy?
Fluttershy: They said no. They told me no. *Growls* THAT ESMERELDA HAS GONE TOO FAR! SHE TURNED THOSE NICE PONIES AGAINST US!
Twilight Sparkle: Yeah.
Applejack: When I get a hold of my sister she's in big trouble.
Pinkie Pie: Why take away something that makes me happy? *Gets depressed but then gets mad and her mane gets messy* They are gonna pay.
Rainbow Dash: No way am I gonna let Scoot-a-loo tell us no or talk that way to me.
Rarity: Or me.
Megan: Remember its not their faults. *A few ponies come up*
Ponies: No its ours.
Pony 1: I should have never called Esmerelda blank flank. Sure I had mine before she even got hers but that didn't give me the right to call her that.
Pony 2: Same here.
Younger pony: And it wasn't right for me to call Apple Bloom a blank flank either. Now I know how it feels not to have 1 again.
Megan: There's a lesson to be learned here.
Twilight Sparkle: Yeah. And I think I know what it is. Don't call people names. It will backfire on you. *Tries to get it back but to no avail* Guess we can't get them that way.
Baby Lickety-Split: But everyone's right. No one should be called blank flanks just because they have none.
Sweet Stuff: Exactly.
Baby Sweet Stuff: Yeah. I don't like that name.
Baby Ribbon: Me either.
Celestia: Then let's make a decree. Then show it to Esmerelda. *Writes it* From this day forward no one is to ever call any pony without a cutie mark a blank flank. It is hereby outlawed.
Windwhistler: What should be the penalty? Putting them in jail would be kind of extreme.
Megan: I got it. They must do something nice for the person they hurt.
Twilight Sparkle: Like saying "I'm sorry"
Megan: Sort of. Saying your sorry helps the hurt. But we have to do something nice to make them feel better. *Snaps her fingers* Buy them Ice cream.
Lickety-Split: Good idea.
Celestia: I agree.
Megan: Sign it and seal it Celestia. *She does* We have to promise to keep this new law. No breaking it or burning it.
Everyone: We agree.
Will the ponies get their cutie marks back? Will the CMC come back? And what about Esmerelda? Find out in part 3. To be continued.
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Post by djlamar2 on May 18, 2011 15:22:11 GMT -8
Part 3:
Megan: Now then to talk to Esmerelda. To the Volcano of Gloom.
Meanwhile at the volcano Esmerelda and the CMC are celebrating:
Esmerelda: Ha. That will teach them not to call us blank flanks. *Looking at Apple Bloom* What's wrong Apple Bloom? Why aren't you happy? They don't have any cutie marks anymore.
Apple Bloom: Its just that......
Esmerelda: Just what friend?
Apple Bloom: Its just that I yelled at my sister for calling you a... well you know.
Esmerelda: Oh come on. They called me a blank flank first.
Apple Bloom: But did she call you one? My sister is too nice to call anyone a blank flank.
Esmerelda: And she probably was thinking of it then.
Sweetie Belle: And we weren't very nice to Fluttershy either. We probably hurt her feelings.
Scoot-a-loo: And I feel pretty bad for yelling at Megan and Rainbow Dash. Sure they had cutie marks but.....
Esmerelda: But now they don't right?
All 3: Yeah.
Esmerelda: That's my point girls. Now they know how it feels to.... *The doorbell rings* Ugh distractions. Who is it?
Megan: Its Megan. I want to talk.
Esmerelda: I don't want to talk to you or your blank flank friends.
Megan: Please. Let us in. We have something we'd like to show you. *Esmerelda opens the door*
Esmerelda: Oh its you guys.
Megan: Well?
Ponies: We're sorry Esmerelda.
Younger pony: And sorry Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scoot-a-loo.
Ponies: We shouldn't have ever called you blank flanks. Can you ever forgive us?
Esmerelda: *With tears in her eyes* You called me a blank flank, made fun of me. And now you want my forgiveness? *They nod* NEVER! *Rainbow Dash runs off and comes back with a cooler* What's this?
Rainbow Dash: Its something we came up with. Well Megan and Celestia did. Megan the decree. *She hands it to Esmerelda*
Esmerelda: *Reading* Because of what has happened here today.... *Sniffling* The name "Blank flank" Is hereby outlawed. It isn't nice and it isn't right. From now on if anyone uses this name they must buy ice cream for the 1s hurt. Signed, Princess Celestia.
Megan: See?
Esmerelda: Ha its probably a trap. Right girls? *She looks behind her and their gone* Right?
Sweetie Belle: Sorry sis. Didn't mean to be mean.
Rarity: Aw its alright.
Scoot-a-loo: Rainbow Dash. I shouldn't have gotten mad. I'm sorry.
Rainbow Dash: Its O.K. I forgive you.
Apple Bloom: Sis. *Applejack just turns her head* Come on sis. Don't be mad.
Applejack: You yelled at me.
Apple Bloom: I'm sorry sister. *Applejack still stands there*
Applejack: I'll never forgive you. *Smiles* Psych. Of course I forgive you. But I think you need to apologize to Megan and Fluttershy. Their feelings are hurt too.
All 3: Sorry Fluttershy and Megan.
Megan: Its alright.
Fluttershy: Its O.K. Now smile or I'll give you the look. *They all giggle*
Esmerelda: You can forgive them just like that? Ha. I'll never forgive them.
Megan: How can you say that? Have you got no heart?
How could you be so cold (With the FiM cast singing too):
Megan: How could you be so cold? So rigged and controlled. How could your heart be so small? Haven't you any feelings at all.
Twilight Sparkle: How could you be so hard? Why don't you drop your guard?
Apple Bloom: You have some warmth deep inside. Why should it be the feeling you hide?
Fluttershy: There's room enough for everyone in this world in which we live.
Sweetie Belle: Can you find it in your heat to forgive. *She thinks back to that day and tears well up in her eyes as she sees Twilight Sparkle hugging her that day*
All: Why don't you show some love. Some warm and tender love.
Baby Sweet Stuff: It'll come a thousand fold and you'll wonder.....
All: How you could've been so cold. *The tears drop to the floor and she starts crying*
Esmerelda: I've been a bad girl. Of course I can forgive you. What's in the cooler anyway?
Rainbow Dash: Ice cream. We bought you all some. We were jerks.
All: Yeah.
Esmerelda: Is there enough for everyone? *They nod* Here. *Gives them each 1* That's for calling you a........ well you know.
Celestia: Its O.K to say it. Just don't call anyone that.
Megan: Now can you reverse the spell on my friends? *Laughter is heard* Hydia?
Hydia: That's right. That spell is powerful. Stupid pony. You can't reverse it.
Reeka: The ponies will never get their cutie marks back ever again.
Draggle: They'll be blank flanks forever.
Twilight Sparkle: You meanies.
Esmerelda: Its all my fault. I should have known it was irreversible.
Is the spell really irreversible? Find out in part 4 tomorrow. To be continued.
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Post by Al1701 on May 18, 2011 15:39:36 GMT -8
Wow. I did not see the witches showing up.
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