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Post by weirdraptor on Sept 7, 2011 21:23:09 GMT -8
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Post by weirdraptor on Sept 13, 2011 10:33:07 GMT -8
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Post by weirdraptor on Oct 16, 2011 18:10:38 GMT -8
Work has began on Book 2 again. Will have the next chapter up tomorrow.
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Post by Al1701 on Oct 16, 2011 18:18:07 GMT -8
Coolness.
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Post by weirdraptor on Oct 17, 2011 16:02:39 GMT -8
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Post by Al1701 on Oct 17, 2011 17:16:54 GMT -8
Good to see you back on track. I'm glad to see the kicking Catrina while she's down let up. Megan being haunted by nightmares is interesting. Are they just the phantoms of a still traumatized mind or something more?
I can't say much about the Tales ponies. I have a hard time seeing Patch as a Pegasus.
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Post by weirdraptor on Oct 17, 2011 17:30:44 GMT -8
It's just Megan suffering from the trauma. The way I see it, it would take a long time for a child to recover after her experience.
I just made the Tales ponies what I personally thought suited them best since they couldn't all be earth ponies like in the original show. I'd like to be able to showcase their personalities more, but I don't want to lose focus of the main stories.
Perhaps I'll start writing "side-story" one shots about specific ponies in something like "My Little Pony: Chronicles: Interludes" or something, or maybe even I'll retell My Little Pony Tales in this setting in that MLP: C: Interludes. Not sure yet. No way in hell am I retelling G3-G3.5, though. That would require me to actually watch those.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jan 9, 2012 12:20:57 GMT -8
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Post by Al1701 on Jan 9, 2012 19:09:13 GMT -8
Dumb move Ace. You just pissed her off.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jan 9, 2012 20:09:07 GMT -8
Sad thing is, I can totally see him pulling scrap like that if he did have wings. He was bad enough in the original when stuck at ground level.
So what'd you think overall? Did I spend too much time at the Solstice party?
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Post by Al1701 on Jan 10, 2012 3:21:28 GMT -8
I don't think so. Considering you're shooting for 26 chapters, I think you have the time to concentrate of events.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jan 10, 2012 15:27:20 GMT -8
Okay, thanks.
Ah, I see you decided to go with My Little Pony Legends.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jan 11, 2012 1:32:40 GMT -8
I don't think I'm going to hit 26 chapters this time around, but you never know.
Also, I've been editing and cleaning up Book 1, tweaking dialogue, descriptions, and somewhat alternating how some scenes went to be more natural. I even gave Megan's parents proper names: Dirk and Anna.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jan 16, 2012 17:09:18 GMT -8
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Post by Al1701 on Jan 17, 2012 17:24:26 GMT -8
The plot move forward. I don't really have much else to say. The bad guys of course went after children for easy pickings.
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