The Magic of Ponyland: Dark Star's Revenge

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Alright here is the 6 part story I was talking about. Dark Star is back and she wants revenge on all those who helped Sunstar get rid of her. So here we go. We start our adventure and David and Melissa are talking about what happened while Jessica was in the hospital with Christina and Thomas.

Part 1: She has returned

Jessica:
So that's what happened to her.

David:
Yeah.

Melissa:
If it weren't for us she'd still be a staff.

Jessica:
Hey honey can you go check on the twins. I need to ask Melissa something in private.

David:
What's with all the privacy here lately? *Leaves*

Melissa:
So you got dad's stuff ready?

Jessica:
Yep. I even helped Princess Sparkle.... err I mean Twilight Sparkle pick out a present for him.

Meanwhile in the volcano of gloom

Dark Star can be seen with Wizacus talking to Hydia and her girls.

Hydia:
Wizacus are you sure we can trust her? I mean she is a demon.

Dark Star:
Such pathetic witches. *Scoffs*

Wizacus:
Silence. Don't talk about my niece that way. She may have fouled up everything but this time with your help they'll get it right.

Dark Star:
*Scoffs* Like you did any better. How many defeats does this make Wizacus? 3 maybe? Once when you were defeated after taking control of the Breezie's home. Again when you kidnapped those baby ponies and how were you defeated this time again? Oh yeah. By a bunch of Megan's and David's friends.

Wizacus:
And this makes sense how?!

Dark Star:
DON'T RAISE YOUR VOICE AT ME WIZACUS! I can kill you like *A flash in her eyes is seen* that.

Wizacus:
Fine. We'll do it your way.

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I like!!

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Thanks. Let's get back to our story.

Meanwhile in Ponyland Twilight Sparkle and the rest are looking at a cage

Twilight Sparkle:
That's weird. I swore that cage was magic proof.

Sunstar:
This wasn't done by Dark Star I'm afraid Twilight Sparkle. This looks like the handywork of a powerful wizard.

Twilight Sparkle:
I hope David and Megan sees the mess soon. Who knows what she might be plotting.

Sunstar:
My words exactly princess.

Back in the human world the book glows

David:
Wonder what's up in Ponyland? *Opens it and gasps* Dark Star escaped.

Melissa:
But daddy didn't Twilight Sparkle seal her up?

David:
That's true. We'd better investigate. *Megan comes rushing in the door*

Megan:
Did you see?

David:
Yes. Looks like we have a demon problem. Let's go.

Jessica:
Wait I want to come with you. Let me get the twins. *She does*

David:
I'll see if someone can keep an eye on them while we fight Dark Star. *She nods and they head there*

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As they look at the cage they see Twilight Sparkle upset

Twilight Sparkle:
Some magical princess I am. I can't keep a demon at bay.

Sunstar:
Stop beating yourself up Princess Sparkle. This wasn't your fault. *David comes up*

David:
So I take it Dark Star escaped.

Twilight Sparkle:
Yeah. *Pounds her hooves* Argh. I knew I should have checked up on her.

David:
Its okay princess. *Laughing is heard* Its her.

Dark Star:
Yes its me. What a pathetic little princess. Your magic didn't affect Wizacus.

David:
Take it back.

Dark Star:
Why? Its the truth.

David:
TAKE IT BACK!

Dark Star:
Heh. Temper, temper human. But anyway I didn't come to gloat. I came here to give you a warning. Stay out of my way or else.

Sunstar:
Or else what?

Dark Star:
Come, come now Sunstar. You of all ponies should know what I'm capable of. After all we are 1 in the same. See ya losers. *She disappears and her laughter is heard*

David:
COME BACK HERE YOU COWARD!

Megan:
David no need to worry about her. *She points to Twilight Sparkle who's on the ground crying*

David:
She's gonna pay. Don't listen to her Twilight Sparkle. We'll stop her..... somehow.

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Will they be able to stop her? Will Ponyland be doomed? All these questions and more will be answered in part 2 of Dark Star's revenge.

To be continued tomorrow.

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Previously on the Magic of Ponyland

Dark Star:
Such pathetic witches.

Twilight Sparkle:
Some magical princess I am.

Part 2: Her master plan

After being told she was nothing but a failure by Dark Star, Twilight Sparkle locked herself in her room at the Mystical Palace. Her friends and her sisters tried to get her to answer the door.

David:
Twilight Sparkle come on buddy. *Knocking on the door to her room which is locked* Please come out.

Magicdust:
She's been in there all day David. *Knocking softly* Princess Sparkle its your sister Magicdust please open the door.

Twilight Sparkle:
Go away. I don't even deserve this crown.

Sunstar:
Alright that's it. Out of my way. I'll talk some sense into her.

David:
Go easy on her Sunstar. She has it pretty rough already.

Sunstar:
I'll try but she needs to get out of this pity party already and buck up. *She gets a key out that Majestic gave her* Thankfully your mom and dad always had a spare key to these rooms. Just let me talk to her. *They nod and she heads in* Twilight Sparkle.

Twilight Sparkle:
I said go away.

Sunstar:
Okay that's enough. You listen to me young lady. You listening? Now I may not be a princess but I know what its like to have times like this.

Twilight Sparkle:
Ever had a magic spell backfire?

Sunstar:
Tons of times. When I was still trying to get rid of Dark Star I came up with a spell that would kill her. But guess what?

Twilight Sparkle:
It almost killed you didn't it?

Sunstar:
Yeah. But you know what? I never gave up. *She looks at her like "Uh huh"* Okay so awhile back I did. But I had friends who believed in me. And you do too. Especially a human who if it weren't for him you would be a monster right now right? *She nods* And you wouldn't have found out a special something about you now would you?

Twilight Sparkle:
He is a special friend. But you heard Dark Star.

Sunstar:
She's just trying to get at you. Remember when you took on Sombra?

Twilight Sparkle:
How could I forget? It wasn't that long ago.

Sunstar:
Did you ever give up trying to find the real you?

Twilight Sparkle:
No I didn't. I kept looking for that baby princess. I kept saying "I have to find her. My friends are counting on me". And that's what drove me to succeed. *She perks up* Thanks Sunstar. Sorry for being so down on myself.

Sunstar:
Its okay. *They hug* Now if she starts to get to you just tell yourself "I can do this. I won't let her get to me." *She nods*

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Meanwhile at the volcano of gloom

Dark Star:
Now then. I have a plan. I'm gonna need your help Wizacus.

Wizacus:
Hmph. And why should I help you?

Dark Star:
Because if you don't I'll take your precious volcano of gloom and destroy it when I wreak havoc on Ponyland. Remember I decimated an entire land before.

Wizacus:
Fine. What's your plan your evilness?

Dark Star:
Get some monsters from the past. I don't care who it is or what they did. Have them meet here. Also bring back the smooze. But this time let me handle it.

Hydia:
Girl I like the way you think.

Dark Star:
They don't call me Dark Star for nothing Hydia.

Back in Ponyland

Sunstar:
I can feel something. She's planning something big.

David:
How big?

Sunstar:
I'm afraid she might use our old enemies from the past to help with her cause.

David:
Then we might need some help from the past as well. Megan go get the princess ponies and Woebegone.

Megan:
Right.

David:
Sunstar you and I will go get Catrina, the bushwoolies and the furbobs.

Megan:
Don't forget the stonebacks. *They nod*

David:
Danny go get Bumble, her bees and the flutter ponies.

Danny:
On it.

David:
Molly and the magical princess ponies you round up Mr. Moochlack, the Grundles, The Breezies and get Spike and Malicious as well.

Molly:
You got it.

Melissa:
What about me daddy?

Crystal:
And me.

David:
You 2 have the most important job ever. Go find the gnome ponies. Who wants to get the Sunnyvaillians?

Twilight Sparkle:
Leave that to me. I know you asked me to help with Molly but I want to get some people as well.

David:
Alright. And everyone keep a lookout for Dark Star and Wizacus. Who knows what they are up to. We'll meet back here in 1 hour.

Mimic:
I can go see our old friends too. Maybe the green mountain elves, the goblins and the gnomes will help too. *He nods and they head out*

David:
Jessica you watch the little ones. *She nods*

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Where David and Sunstar are

Sunstar:
I hope they remember you.

David:
They should. It hasn't been that long. *Catrina walks up*

Catrina:
David long time no see buddy.

David:
Yeah. Been behaving yourself?

Catrina:
Of course. Haven't touched any strange potions in a long time. What's up?

David:
See. *Tells her of what is going on* And we need your help.

Catrina:
Of course I'll help. So will the bushwoolies.

Bushwoolies:
Yeah yeah.

David:
Great. Now we need the furbobs and the stonebacks. *Dark Star is heard laughing* Its her.

Dark Star:
No matter how many friends you get you won't stop me. *Laughs evilly*

David:
Knowing her she's going to see Squirk.

Sunstar:
How'd you figure that?

David:
She's heading to where he lives. *She nods* Hold on. I have an idea. Let's go see his royal eminence. Bet ya Crunch can help too. *They nod*

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Will they stop Dark Star? Or will her plans stop them? Find out next time on the Magic of Ponyland.

To be continued.

Part 3 tomorrow .

[djlamar2]

Sorry for the absence of story. Yesterday I had a baseball game I played so anyway here's part 3.

Previously on the Magic of Ponyland

Dark Star:
Get the monsters from the past.

David:
Let's get our friends.

Part 3: Friends are the best kind of power

David:
I sure hope the furbobs have been nice to the stonebacks.

Wishful:
I hope. *They enter where the furbobs live*

David:
Hey furbobs.

Furbob:
David. Good to see you.

Furbob #2:
No its not.

David:
How are you getting along with the stonebacks?

Furbob:
Great. Megan was right.

David:
Now listen we need your help. *Tells them*

Furbob:
Anything to help friends.

David:
Great. *The stonebacks snort* I bet their saying yes.

Meanwhile Dark Star is talking to Squirk

Squirk:
And you say I can get revenge on the ponies?

Dark Star:
Sure.

Squirk:
Count me in.

Crank:
I can help too.

Squirk:
Shut up Crank.

Dark Star:
Now we need more help. Knowing Megan and the others they are getting their friends together to help them.

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Meanwhile Danny goes to see the flutter ponies and Bumble and her bees.

Danny:
Flutter ponies. *Rosedust comes up*

Rosedust:
What's up? *Danny explains*

Danny:
And we need your help.

Rosedust:
You got it.

Meanwhile David goes to see His royal eminence

David:
His royal eminence we need your help.

His Royal Eminence:
Trouble I bet.

David:
Yes. Can we borrow Crunch for awhile?

His Royal Eminence:
Sure. So what's going on? *David explains* I see. I'll send him and his son with you. *He nods*

Sunstar:
Let's go back. *He nods and just then laughter is heard*

Dark Star:
Your not going anywhere.

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Will they stop Dark Star? Will David and Sunstar be okay? Find out on the next Magic of Ponyland.

To be continued.

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Previously on the Magic of Ponyland

Squirk:
Count me in.

Danny:
We need your help.

Dark Star:
Your not going anywhere.

Part 4: Dark Star's plans are revealed

Dark Star:
Your not going anywhere.

David:
Oh man. *The stonebacks are seen*

Danny:
David.

Sunstar:
Okay Dark Star what are you up to for real?

Squirk:
*Coming up* As if you didn't know.

David:
Squirk. Your nothing without your flashstone.

Squirk:
That's true. I will be powerful with Dark Star's help.

Sunstar:
She doesn't want to make you powerful Squirk. She'll kill you too.

Squirk:
Let's go. We got more help to get. *They leave*

David:
Sunstar what was that about?

Sunstar:
Remember when I showed you how she killed the elders? *He nods* When I became her that time she was gonna kill me after she killed them. But she knew what would happen then.

David:
Let's hope everyone is finding our friends.

With Molly and the magical princess ponies

Molly:
Now if I remember right Kindheart's cottage should be around here somewhere. *They see it and see that its abandoned* Kindheart? *Sees something* Look at this guys. *Touches it and a hologram of Kindheart is seen*

Kindheart:
Megan if your watching this then I have passed away. Its been awhile girl. If your looking for Malicious he's in the house. If he sees you he can help you on whatever you need to do. Megan my friend take care. *They head inside and see a dog*

Molly:
Malicious. *He barks happily and pounces on her* Okay, okay big guy. Hey listen we need your help. *He barks happily* I'll take that as a yes. *A pony comes out* Oh hi there.

Pony:
Are you friends of my mom?

Molly:
Yes. Your Kindheart's daughter? *She nods*

Pony:
Name's Sweetheart. I can help too.

Molly:
Good idea. All we need now is.... *Spike comes out* Spike.

Spike:
Molly. Good to see you.

Molly:
Same here. We need your help.

Spike:
Sure. What's up? *She explains* I see. Count me in.

Molly:
We need Mr. Moochlack. *They nod*

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They head toward his bed and breakfast.

Molly:
Mr. Moochlack. *He comes out*

Mr. Moochlack:
Molly. Good to see you. *She nods* And do my eyes deceive me? Sweetheart?

Sweetheart:
Its me Mr. Moochlack.

Mr. Moochlack:
So what brings you to my bed and breakfast?

Molly:
See. *Tells him* And we need your help.

Mr. Moochlack:
Hmm. I got it. Misset and Michelle.

Molly:
But last time they kidnapped the newborn twins.

Mr. Moochlack:
They learned their lesson from that time. *Misset comes out*

Misset:
I want to make up for what we did the last time we saw each other.

Michelle:
If its to see my friends Sparkler then I'll help ya.

Molly:
That's all for the ones we know around here.

Mr. Moochlack:
Actually I bet Morticia and Mortiana will help.

Molly:
Good idea.

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Dark Star is talking to the witches who have the ingredients for the smooze.

Dark Star:
Throw them in.

Hydia:
Got it. *She throws in the ingredients 1 by 1 and Dark Star gets frustrated*

Dark Star:
Out of my way. *Tosses the whole thing in* Why are you wasting your time Hydia?

Hydia:
Look do you want the smooze or not?

Dark Star:
Yes. Now watch as I work my magic. *Her horn glows and suddenly monsters are formed* Heh.

Wizacus:
Nice. Now what?

Dark Star:
Now we go find Arabus and Zeb.

The scene cuts to Crank who is having second thoughts about what's going on.

Crank:
This doesn't seem right. Squirk what are we gonna do?

Squirk:
It seems right to me so SHUT UP!

Crank:
I don't like it. What have the ponies done to us?

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Will they stop Dark Star? And will Crank decide to become good? Find out in part 5.

To be continued.

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Part 5: Crank has remorse

Meanwhile Twilight Sparkle goes to see the Sunnyvailians.

Twilight Sparkle:
I hope their in better spirits than the last time. *A few come up*

Pony:
Hey Twilight Sparkle. Here to see Knight Shade?

Twilight Sparkle:
I am. *He comes up and is toting a little pony* Knight Shade. Ohh. Who's baby is that?

Knight Shade:
She's mine. *Baby Half-note comes out*

Twilight Sparkle:
I wondered what happened to you years ago?

Baby Half-note:
My mom agreed to let me marry Knight Shade. After all it wasn't his fault my shadow was stolen. Say hi to Twilight Sparkle Baby Sweetsong.

Baby Sweetsong:
Hi Twilight Sparkle.

Baby Half-note:
By the way when did you get those magnificent wings? Their beautiful.

Twilight Sparkle:
You mean you don't know? *She shakes her head* Where do I start? *Tells her of King Sombra and a baby princess who was lost. She tells her that she was this lost princess and how her real self came out when she defeated King Sombra* And since then I've been a princess.

Baby Half-note:
Who would have thought that the same baby David saved was an actual princess. I am not worthy to be in the sight of such royalty Princess Sparkle. *Bows gracefully*

Twilight Sparkle:
Arise Baby Half-note. And please call me Twilight Sparkle. I maybe a princess but I have respect for others. So how old is she?

Baby Half-note:
1 year old. So what brings you to Sunnyvaile? *She explains about Dark Star and how they need help*

Pony:
I say we help them.

Pony #2:
Yeah if it weren't for them we would have never got our shadows back from Arabus.

Knight Shade:
Bet ya the Munstervaillians will help too.

Twilight Sparkle:
Good idea. Never thought about them.

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Meanwhile Crank is having second thoughts about what Dark Star wants them to do

Crank:
This just doesn't seem right. Besides he yelled at me. I'm tired of being yelled at. *He leaves the volcano of gloom without anyone noticing* Gotta warn the others.

Meanwhile the others are gathered at Paradise Estate waiting on everyone

David:
And here comes Megan with the princesses and Woebegone.

Princess Royal Blue:
Megan told us everything. We're ready to help.

Woebegone:
Yeah and my friend the witch will help too. *Molly comes up with Mr. Moochlack, Sweetheart, Malicious and Spike*

David:
That is 1 big dog. *Twilight Sparkle comes up with the Sunnyvailians and Munstervaillians*

Sunnyvailians:
Heard you need our help.

David:
Sure do. *Mimic comes up with the goblins, gnomes and princess Maive*

Maive:
I'm ready to help out when you are.

Goblin mom:
Yeah.

Gnomes:
Us too.

David:
Now we wait for my daughter and Megan's. *They come up with not only the gnome ponies but the breezies as well* That's all of us. *Crank is seen* What's he doing here?

Megan:
Squirk probably sent him. I'll take care of him.

Crank:
Wait. Please hear me out. *Starts sobbing* I didn't mean to do all those things. Dark Star wants to destroy Ponyland. She's having the witches create smooze monsters. I quit working for Squirk because he was always mean to me. Please say I can join in on the fight against Dark Star. Please.

Twilight Sparkle:
I can feel it. He's telling the truth.

David:
Of course you can. The more the merrier they say. *They nod and her laughter is heard and smooze can be heard growling* Here they come.

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Will they stop Dark Star? Is Crank really turning a new leaf? Find out in the thrilling conclusion of Dark Star's revenge.

To be concluded.

Tomorrow the exciting part 6 .

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Can't wait!