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Post by djlamar2 on Mar 11, 2014 17:34:06 GMT -8
I was thinking that since Tyrak controlled her as a baby in the magic of ponyland that there could be affects her still to this day. She just hasn't showed any signs of it. Till now. Was thinking of a plot for my rendition of princess twilight. And here it is. Her friends must figure out a way to rid twilight sparkle of his ghost. Let me know what you think.
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Post by sunstar on Mar 11, 2014 21:40:14 GMT -8
You could have Sunstar set her free. After all, Twilight set her free of Dark Sun's hold. Can't wait to read it!
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Post by djlamar2 on Mar 13, 2014 12:26:28 GMT -8
Here's a preview:
She was controlled by Tyrak as a baby.
Twilight Sparkle: I feel funny.
But soon Tyrak's power will rise again.
Twilight Sparkle: *Distorted* There is no more Twilight Sparkle. There is only Nightmare Sparkle.
David: What's happened to her?
Not even Mr. Moochick knows what to do.
Mr. Moochick: It seems as if Tyrak still has his hold on her.
Will this be the end of Twilight Sparkle? Or will a hero emerge to help her?
Sunstar: You can't let him control you Princess Sparkle. You're not evil.
Coming soon....
The Magic of Ponyland..... (Evil laughter can be heard) Twilight's only hope.
Tyrak: Soon I will be able to bring in the night that never ends.
Celestia: You might be my student on the inside Tyrak but you're controlling her and we will stop you.
The screen goes black and the title is seen.
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Post by djlamar2 on Mar 29, 2014 19:21:58 GMT -8
I figured that Tyrak would create havoc at 1 point by switching the mane six's talents. (Except Twilight Sparkle's). The idea is Sunstar and Twilight Sparkle think they've solved the problem the day before but see their friends trying to do what the others supposed to be doing. I liked the plot of magical mystery cure but I already turned Twilight Sparkle into a unipeg. By the way it'll be a 6 part story. Let me know what you think. Its coming in June.
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