I liked the story! Derpy Hooves would be considered an Oc formed with a background character. one thing, never leave Derpy alone with Pinkie, ever! Who knows what crazyness those two would get into?
"This is it then, all hope is lost." Prowl looked away from the screens as Quintession warships strafed Iacon. "That's it? you are giving up?" Altima asked. "There is nothing we can do, Princess. Optimus is no longer with us, and Rodimus is dying from the same thing that took Optimus from us. Without the Matrix, we might as well surrender." Ultra looked pained.