Raven song (R)
Aug 5, 2009 11:15:29 GMT -8
Post by Lili on Aug 5, 2009 11:15:29 GMT -8
Ok, so this, basically, is very random. My random thoughts tried to make something that's NOT random and kind of connected D:
R for... idk, violence? Dx
The world is dying, slowly. Come, children of the night!
Sunlight. Bright, blinding sunlight. Bright, blinding, burning sunlight.
I hid in the shadows again…
The raven is still watching over your rotting body!
- Mum! Mum, there’s a dead person here!
Someone gasped. Somebody started to shout. The wind whispered laughter into my ear.
- Mum! Muuuuuum! Look there!
- Child, can’t you see… Oh my GOD! Someone call the ambulance!
I opened my lips wanting to ask for water, but my body only let out one slow and very painful cough. It’s all that it’s good for anyway…
Rise! And walk! Minions of the dead, walk into the light!
Something snapped in my head…
Come one, come all! It’s the carnival! See all the freaks, see all the fools, get a prize, eat some candy, your life will seem better after you visit the CARNIVAL!
Freaks and fools… Those were the ones to go there, but me… I was the one in the cage. With that beautiful blind red-haired woman… her skin was as white as snow, lips red from blood... And when she smiled, I saw fangs.
- Mommy, look, a vampire! A vampire!
I growled at each one of them...
Your body starts to rot, and it’s the entire devils fault!
I was Christian, always. But I never believed in the Devil… There is no such thing as a devil. No. Such. Thing. As. A. Devil!
Ding!
Diling!
…
There are no angels.
You are an angel, a black-winged angel. Fill my life with words of sorrow!
I am the angel of sorrow. I bring only sorrow. And pity. Only sorrow and pity.
Let me out of the cage; let me out to the light!
Your skin will burn to ashes, your flesh will rot!
And they did let me out. And my body turned to rotting flesh. A raven ate my eye… I am no angel, I am no monster… What am I?
And a raven will take your soul to heaven, because you stepped into the light!
Ravens circle around me. An ambulance came, they took me in. Took me back to a cage… Back to another… No, I won’t go back into a cage!
I woke up at night, on a bed. I opened my eye and looked at the ceiling for a few minutes.
It’s not a cage.
And you will lose your wings, and you will lose your sight, but the Raven will grant you power!
I felt something in my stomach. My vision got all blurry. Then my body started to move by itself.
I stood up, walked to the window, opened it, put one leg over the edge, then another.
Then I pushed my rotting body, all it took was only one small push.
And the Raven will give you wings, and you will fly to heavens!
All I heard was the wind. Only the wind…
R for... idk, violence? Dx
The world is dying, slowly. Come, children of the night!
Sunlight. Bright, blinding sunlight. Bright, blinding, burning sunlight.
I hid in the shadows again…
The raven is still watching over your rotting body!
- Mum! Mum, there’s a dead person here!
Someone gasped. Somebody started to shout. The wind whispered laughter into my ear.
- Mum! Muuuuuum! Look there!
- Child, can’t you see… Oh my GOD! Someone call the ambulance!
I opened my lips wanting to ask for water, but my body only let out one slow and very painful cough. It’s all that it’s good for anyway…
Rise! And walk! Minions of the dead, walk into the light!
Something snapped in my head…
Come one, come all! It’s the carnival! See all the freaks, see all the fools, get a prize, eat some candy, your life will seem better after you visit the CARNIVAL!
Freaks and fools… Those were the ones to go there, but me… I was the one in the cage. With that beautiful blind red-haired woman… her skin was as white as snow, lips red from blood... And when she smiled, I saw fangs.
- Mommy, look, a vampire! A vampire!
I growled at each one of them...
Your body starts to rot, and it’s the entire devils fault!
I was Christian, always. But I never believed in the Devil… There is no such thing as a devil. No. Such. Thing. As. A. Devil!
Ding!
Diling!
…
There are no angels.
You are an angel, a black-winged angel. Fill my life with words of sorrow!
I am the angel of sorrow. I bring only sorrow. And pity. Only sorrow and pity.
Let me out of the cage; let me out to the light!
Your skin will burn to ashes, your flesh will rot!
And they did let me out. And my body turned to rotting flesh. A raven ate my eye… I am no angel, I am no monster… What am I?
And a raven will take your soul to heaven, because you stepped into the light!
Ravens circle around me. An ambulance came, they took me in. Took me back to a cage… Back to another… No, I won’t go back into a cage!
I woke up at night, on a bed. I opened my eye and looked at the ceiling for a few minutes.
It’s not a cage.
And you will lose your wings, and you will lose your sight, but the Raven will grant you power!
I felt something in my stomach. My vision got all blurry. Then my body started to move by itself.
I stood up, walked to the window, opened it, put one leg over the edge, then another.
Then I pushed my rotting body, all it took was only one small push.
And the Raven will give you wings, and you will fly to heavens!
All I heard was the wind. Only the wind…
I liked it.
There were a few places where you used the present tense and then the past tense, without using italics to show the switch, but I think you meant to do that.