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Post by weirdraptor on May 5, 2012 16:13:21 GMT -8
I can wait and enjoy.
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Post by Al1701 on May 11, 2012 6:46:22 GMT -8
Episode 15 is written and just needs editing.
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Post by Al1701 on May 12, 2012 11:36:02 GMT -8
Episode 15 here. 1x15: Willow RunI honestly had my doubts about how this would turn out. I thought of the idea when I thought I would need to throw in a Gusty episode. It still worked out okay with some more development of her character. I'm actually going to take a good look at the episodes planned going forward and see if I have better ideas. Slice of life can be a pain to write because you have to think of ways to make it interesting.
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Post by firehooves on May 31, 2012 14:59:03 GMT -8
By the way I did want to compliment you on how you handled the moochick's arrival in the valley. They aren't mistrustful and hostile towards him, yet they do show a bit of suspicion with the newcomer. well played
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 2, 2012 4:26:45 GMT -8
After 16, I'm going to be doing the "tent pole" episodes. In this case, the season premiers, midseason climaxes, and other important episodes. Truth be told, writing slice of life is a pain.
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Post by firehooves on Jun 2, 2012 6:10:42 GMT -8
Oh, And I did like the reason you provided for the tail ribbons- that they are a sign of freedom from the gizmonks. I had made them a remeberence of a herione from the fall of equestria. Sundance as the teacher is amazing, and I loved Bow Tie explaing the tail ribbons, I tied her to that in my fics, and it totally makes sense! And the sea ponies acutally having names and speaking parts was a pleasant departure from them just being in two eps, then the baby sea ponies taking over for them... Tubular Experience is a very good story! ^^
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 2, 2012 6:21:49 GMT -8
The names are canon, except for the stallions of course. Manta Ray is actually a little shout out to a friend's work with his coloration.
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Post by firehooves on Jun 2, 2012 6:24:46 GMT -8
I actually used the canon sea pony names in my fics, too. Though I haven't created male ones yet. There are so few people write about G1, and it's good to see someone doing such a good job rewriting it as a modern show. I really like your 'episodes', and hope you can do something with them! ;D
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 2, 2012 6:40:11 GMT -8
It would be nice if I could get in contact with Hasbro about adapting it or perhaps finding people who could gather together to make it an unofficial series. I actually have an idea for Hasbro to spinoff from Friendship is Magic considering recent events in that series. Of course, I need to get in contact with them.
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 24, 2012 15:32:35 GMT -8
A quick update. I'm getting back into the saddle and making progress with episode 16. I'm also doing some rethinking of the episodes still to come. I'm dropping the witch episode and making the episode about Fizzy and Wind Whistler's past a two parter because it's telling two stories (one in the present and one in the present.)
And standby for info on Season 2. It's going to have a lot more adventure episodes and classic enemies.
I've also been considering submitting Legends to Equestria Daily. I wonder if they'll take a spec script series.
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Post by weirdraptor on Jun 24, 2012 16:26:41 GMT -8
Go for it, man.
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 28, 2012 2:59:28 GMT -8
Episode 16 is finally done. I just need to edit it and it'll here for your viewing pleasure.
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Post by Al1701 on Jun 30, 2012 4:12:59 GMT -8
Finally, after all the distractions and writer block, it's here. Episode 16, a Tootsie episode. 1x16: Victory is Sweet
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Post by sunstar on Jul 5, 2012 13:37:59 GMT -8
Other then a few spelling mistates, the story was really good. Whole should be hole, Bread should be bred, and that covers most of it. Some should be something.
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Post by Al1701 on Jul 5, 2012 14:43:05 GMT -8
Edits made. Thanks. What did you think of the story of itself anything in particular catch your eye?
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